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Help please, God
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:26:45 PM in AEST
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You say you love but do you?,
You yell at me and make me hurt,
Then tell me everything's ok,
I sit on my floor,
Wet from my tears,
And think about you,
Did I do something wrong?,
Am I not perfect enough for you?,
God please tell me,
Is it my fault?,
He yells,
He screams,
It scares me,
After the fights,
I say i'm sorry,
Just to stop the fighting,
What if he beats me?,
What should I do?,
God,
Please tell me what I should do?,
I need guidence,
Now more than ever before.
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Re: Help please, God
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:09:49 PM AEST
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oh my god, this is horrible. This isn't for real is it? If it is I say leave him, he doesn't love you.
Artistly speaking, this is a great pice. you expressed the emotions in a way i have never felt before. |
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Re: Help please, God
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:46:17 PM AEST
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If this is a real situation leave him, move far away so that he can never find you.
There is a song that talks about htis "Two Beds and a Coffee Machine" it is by Savage Garden |
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