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Oh Well

Contributed by remy on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:46:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



and the moment comes...
there's no room for another one
while tried, i've lied;
i don't sit well in the pressure
so forget this line...
i'll do better any other time
but for now, i'm out;
just call me when i get back

and well i know you'll see what i mean
set back the thought is far from complete
soft spoken in a gesture
set back in the stars, not so very far
it's much harder to paint it.
one day you know you'll see so clearly
but back this thought is far from complete
still shaping to a texture
but back in the dark, not so very far
it's just harder to say it.

and each time i come to terms
another point i haven't learned
holds me back without a word
forgetting everything conjured
while i'm not so far set back
it's enough so don't even ask
and take a step... back...

i'm not with much time, so forget every line
just take me full blind, and do good to be kind
i'll carry the weight, it should have been great
i'll take this mistake, even in a heartbreak...
now where does it end, you saw me come by
in a closing notice i'll take down my tries
i'll lay over a while and take it in style
skipping the closer just for a little while

i was hoping to retrospect on better things
in the disdain it's plain there's no more to see
the future holds no less of this stupid game
so skip out, and take it in another day...
there's work to work down and forget feeling
i am certain now there's plenty more appealing
the nerve of most men isn't the same thing
forget it now, this has gone to long.

so goes the show...
tell me, didn't you know?
feeling differentiated
by the suppositions squared
and you know...
i didn't sign on for this thing
oh well... well

this moment's gone...
counting sick-days up for fun
in trial, i'd smile;
tomorrow looks to be much better
so forget this time...
i'll do well on another line
as for now, i'm out;
just call me on the fall back

and well you know i'll see what you mean
though the intentions are hard to see
soft spoken in sequester
reach up in the stars, not so very far
it's harder to explain it.
one day i know i'll see so clearly
though i know i so carelessly read
the spring fall semester
it sets up a spark, not so very far
it's just harder to see it.

and each time you come to terms
another point is to be learned
holding down without any words
forgetting everything conjured
now it's not quite the setback
it's enough so i won't ask
and take one step... back...

it's harder to find, especially this time
the boundaries in line, they're all in my mind
as i carry and wait, i hope beyond the mistake
breaking down for a break, and feeling so late...
how should it begin, i saw you walk by
in the opening season all i can deem is a lie
but dust settles while i've sat on the pile
there goes the prelude more for a little while

i was hoping to reconstruct a better thing
in the refrain it's vein to commit so saliently
the future no less could convey another game
so drop out, and take it in another day...
there's work to work down and forget breathing
i am certain now there's no room to be seething
the nerve of most men isn't the same thing
forget it now, it's another stupid song.

so goes the show...
tell me, didn't you know?
feeling differentiated
by the suppositions paired
and you know...
i didn't sign on for this thing
oh well... well

[sorry if it was slightly long and repetitive, but it was on my mind...]




Copyright © remy ... [ 2004-05-13 15:46:08]
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Re: Oh Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:11:09 PM AEST
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Never apologize for your writing....This is awesome. If only I could spill things on my mind like that. :)




Re: Oh Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:59:29 AM AEST
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Remy, my friend, you should never have to apologise for your wonderfully written work. I was hanging onto every word of this. I just wish I could spill my feelings all over a piece of paper. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia


Re: Oh Well (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:26:20 PM AEST
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the repeating just made it more song like =] great write.




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