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Fusion
Contributed by
plous2
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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a platonic eye fills hands so i can see,
the recycled entity of faceted humanity,
its primitive offspring of prism clay,
equates to a continuum of stimulus,
encased by mutation,
language of the day,
ecology of the animal,
knowledge of the world zoo,
its the decision i make,
the child i wont help create,
as ignorance rules the organic burn.
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plous2
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2004-05-13 15:31:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fusion
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:52:03 PM AEST (User
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Wonderfully done....i like it! |
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Re: Fusion
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:56:40 PM AEST (User
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interesting write, sounds like my science class! lol, i like this write... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Fusion
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jarmen_Kell on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:00:19 AM AEST (User
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Welcome back, ol' chap: though it's incomplete it's still a good work as far as I can see. Hope you'd have enough experience to comment on some of my others. |
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Re: Fusion
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:30:29 PM AEST (User
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My dear friend! Welcome back and don't you dare stop writing poems got it? This shows the depth of your mind...and you are one deep fellow! Now read MY poems! lol! j/k
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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