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Array ( [sid] => 47333 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am leaving you tomorrow... [time] => 2004-05-13 12:33:08 [hometext] => I didn't write this from my own pov.I met an amazing guy nearly 4years ago but our timing was all wrong as he was about to leave for Oz for a year.We spent a great November together.I was meant to follow him but didn't happen.This is from his pov.For MC* [bodytext] => I am leaving you tomorrow
For worlds apart.
Then I will hold your hand,
Kiss you one last,
Tell of how I love you
And will...
For all the miles
Only Heaven and Earth
Will part us.

I'll make you promises,
I think I can,
But won't keep.
And you'll believe me
Enough to follow
Into an unknown...

Until I have a change of heart
And cannot fathom a way
To break the news
Or the silence
That will have grown between us.

So, a year later,
I'll return,
Heavy heart,
Travelled, worn and tired
To search for you
And truth.
Confusing abounding
Gathering in the corners
Of my mind,
Corridors of my thoughts,
One feeling and others for another.

How will I tell you
Of how I love her
Or think I do...?
How can I journey
There and back
And lose...?
And with ignorance
Expect that your heart
Will not have altered
With the seasons
That have passed between us?
What will I choose
When the distance rears its ugly head
Between her and I?
To return to you...
Unable to keep my hands to myself...?
What will I do??

I am leaving you tomorrow,
I do what I must
I do only as I can do.
I hope
And you...
You must trust.

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I am leaving you tomorrow...

Contributed by reilt on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:33:08 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



I am leaving you tomorrow
For worlds apart.
Then I will hold your hand,
Kiss you one last,
Tell of how I love you
And will...
For all the miles
Only Heaven and Earth
Will part us.

I'll make you promises,
I think I can,
But won't keep.
And you'll believe me
Enough to follow
Into an unknown...

Until I have a change of heart
And cannot fathom a way
To break the news
Or the silence
That will have grown between us.

So, a year later,
I'll return,
Heavy heart,
Travelled, worn and tired
To search for you
And truth.
Confusing abounding
Gathering in the corners
Of my mind,
Corridors of my thoughts,
One feeling and others for another.

How will I tell you
Of how I love her
Or think I do...?
How can I journey
There and back
And lose...?
And with ignorance
Expect that your heart
Will not have altered
With the seasons
That have passed between us?
What will I choose
When the distance rears its ugly head
Between her and I?
To return to you...
Unable to keep my hands to myself...?
What will I do??

I am leaving you tomorrow,
I do what I must
I do only as I can do.
I hope
And you...
You must trust.





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Re: I am leaving you tomorrow... (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:36:18 PM AEST
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so sad. hopefully this guy will come back, and you two can once again show your love for one another!

brandon


Re: I am leaving you tomorrow... (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:39:19 PM AEST
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i agree with the comment above. very sad.
well written.
Arden




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