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Array ( [sid] => 47305 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my life [time] => 2004-05-13 07:25:53 [hometext] => in a moment of weakness and despair.... [bodytext] => if my life was possible without U
i would have found someone who loved me
as much as i loved them
they would have been my lover
my enemy as well as my best friend
and i...
i wouldn't have had to ignore
the loud cry from my womb of conception
because our lives....
no your life was overwhelmed with deception
like... U would have been pleased
if i would have twice concieved
and our unborn children....
no my unborn children could have been
someones savior. someones hero
but my life...
my life is not possible without U
so we will never know
if i could have experience nirvana
that wasnt heavily laced with
your babies momma drama
and of course
it wouldn't have been complete
if you hadn't felt the need to cheat
not only with my lover. ..but with some other
my life...
my life may have been possible without U
had i looked the other way
after many sexually charged relations
and love was suppose to b my compensation
but all i got was stuck
when after the first kiss
i should have been dismissed
and now my life...
my life wont be possible without U
because of ties, obligations and allegations
that our actions have forged
i could have grown old with someone
who understood my attitude
about the pains of love, the joys of solitude
instead my life
my life wont ever belong to me
my past history has tainted my future destiny
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 61 [informant] => infinitea [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
my life

Contributed by infinitea on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:25:53 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



if my life was possible without U
i would have found someone who loved me
as much as i loved them
they would have been my lover
my enemy as well as my best friend
and i...
i wouldn't have had to ignore
the loud cry from my womb of conception
because our lives....
no your life was overwhelmed with deception
like... U would have been pleased
if i would have twice concieved
and our unborn children....
no my unborn children could have been
someones savior. someones hero
but my life...
my life is not possible without U
so we will never know
if i could have experience nirvana
that wasnt heavily laced with
your babies momma drama
and of course
it wouldn't have been complete
if you hadn't felt the need to cheat
not only with my lover. ..but with some other
my life...
my life may have been possible without U
had i looked the other way
after many sexually charged relations
and love was suppose to b my compensation
but all i got was stuck
when after the first kiss
i should have been dismissed
and now my life...
my life wont be possible without U
because of ties, obligations and allegations
that our actions have forged
i could have grown old with someone
who understood my attitude
about the pains of love, the joys of solitude
instead my life
my life wont ever belong to me
my past history has tainted my future destiny




Copyright © infinitea ... [ 2004-05-13 07:25:53]
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Re: my life (User Rating: 1 )
by XxPerfectlySanexX on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:05:17 PM AEST
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Nice write there.
Makes me feel some weird emotions inside whilst reading.

Keep up the good writes,
Much Love,
PerfectlySanex




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