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Array ( [sid] => 47301 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Realize [time] => 2004-05-13 05:44:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => To realize
your not alone

What Lies ahead
may be unknown

What you can't see
will soon be shown

Feel all the love
that's in you bones

All that you are
is made of earth

From life comes death
and then rebirth

That spark of life
keeps moving forth

In the land and sky
and in the surf

You're always changing
yet stay the same

Until you realize
it's not a game

Pleasure, problems,
peace and pain

Soon it's all over
then back again [comments] => 6 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 19 [informant] => loyalist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Realize

Contributed by loyalist on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:44:33 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

To realize
your not alone

What Lies ahead
may be unknown

What you can't see
will soon be shown

Feel all the love
that's in you bones

All that you are
is made of earth

From life comes death
and then rebirth

That spark of life
keeps moving forth

In the land and sky
and in the surf

You're always changing
yet stay the same

Until you realize
it's not a game

Pleasure, problems,
peace and pain

Soon it's all over
then back again

Copyright © loyalist ... [ 2004-05-13 05:44:33]
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Re: Realize (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:49:33 AM AEST
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Aaaah..excellent..simply beautiful with shining thoughts....venkat

Re: Realize (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:51:23 AM AEST
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:) thats the flow i like,hope i didnt insult you with my comment on the other poem.this is great i really enjoyed it x

Re: Realize (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:49:51 AM AEST
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Yes, the circle. Over and over until we get it right. No, I don't believe in reincarnation, only in man's stupidity. Enough about that. An interesting write. I appreciate the brevity and the profound but simple realizations. Nice.
Stitch

Re: Realize (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:18:41 PM AEST
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well done. really nice poem.

Re: Realize (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:28:49 AM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Realize (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:38:08 AM AEST
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Its a well-thought out concept of rebirth and reincarnation, however, your ending was weak.

I'd change that to;

"It's all over -
soon
to start again"

I also thought this was a bit out

"Until you realize
it's not a game"

I'd change it to

"You're always changing
never the same
So just have fun
it's just a game"

. .. but that's my opinion.

Keep writing.

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