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Array ( [sid] => 47297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sentimental Fool [time] => 2004-05-13 05:14:57 [hometext] => This yet another one of my songs. Wrote it when I was 17. [bodytext] => Why
Do I
Have to be so alone
Just when I
Start to feel fine
You say
That you wanna go
You've got to go

I'm sure you've played this angle a lot little girl
It won't work this time of this I'm sure
You should've saved your line for some other little schmuck
Cuz I'm way too high

Then
I
Can't believe
I'm still on the phone
After you've said goodbye
But I guess my poem
Called 'Sentimental Fool'
Is repeating
The same old line
You should be mine

I hear her say
"Oh please don't go"
But I know it's just
All in my mind
I play her game
But it's always the same
I just don't know
what do I say

And
I
Don't believe
You've taken me for real
So I doubt my size
And say with broken eyes
This is how I feel
You should be real

Don't let me down
I'll be around
And this beautiful sound
Is a broken heart
Which I've found. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 34 [informant] => loyalist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Sentimental Fool

Contributed by loyalist on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:14:57 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Why
Do I
Have to be so alone
Just when I
Start to feel fine
You say
That you wanna go
You've got to go

I'm sure you've played this angle a lot little girl
It won't work this time of this I'm sure
You should've saved your line for some other little schmuck
Cuz I'm way too high

Then
I
Can't believe
I'm still on the phone
After you've said goodbye
But I guess my poem
Called 'Sentimental Fool'
Is repeating
The same old line
You should be mine

I hear her say
"Oh please don't go"
But I know it's just
All in my mind
I play her game
But it's always the same
I just don't know
what do I say

And
I
Don't believe
You've taken me for real
So I doubt my size
And say with broken eyes
This is how I feel
You should be real

Don't let me down
I'll be around
And this beautiful sound
Is a broken heart
Which I've found.

Copyright © loyalist ... [ 2004-05-13 05:14:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sentimental Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:40:29 AM AEST
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do your songs have music to them? if so what instruments do you use? i write songs, i can imagine this being a good song, it's nice to read, better to listen to though i think x

Re: Sentimental Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:46:13 AM AEST
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I just don't know what to say...its a good song nice to read. venkat

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