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Array ( [sid] => 47292 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND [time] => 2004-05-13 02:04:12 [hometext] => This week is Friendship Week so I'd like to post the 2nd poem I ever wrote on this site. It was written to a friend of 50 years who I had just found again [bodytext] =>

"JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND"

When I was 3, small, and not very tall.
I loved creatures of all sizes, shapes, and form.
No one taught me this,
Was just natural for me, was just "Norm"

Butterflies, grasshoppers, snakes,
birds, kitties, puppies, anything alive.
I doctored them when they were sick,
With lots of love, helped them survive.

One day I ventured down an alley
Located behind my house.
There I found cement "Ash Pits" all around.
They were the best "stopping places" in town!


This is an "ashpit" where you burn your trash.

I'd catch everyone early, as they emptied their trash.
I met all the neighbors in one big "Flash!"
We'd visit, laugh, and sometimes cry.
I found I loved people!
It didn't make a difference to me why?

I never saw their outsides
Nor the clothes they would wear.
I sensed their "insides."
Their hearts, their souls, and I'd care!

"Just Let Me Be Your Friend!"
Was the message I emitted to all!
I'm not too little to have friends.
I may not be very wise,
But my heart is filled with love,
If only you would open your eyes!

Seems strange somehow now.
As I recall those years gone by.
I'm 64 years older, and with a sigh.....
I can honestly say, I haven't changed.
I've been rearranged, but my heart is still in tact.

"Just Let Me Be Your Friend."
To love you, to care, to always be there.....
My heart is still filled with love.
The best way to keep it there,
Is to give it away, and to share.

And so my dear friend.
Little did you know when you paid your fee.
You'd find a True Friend.
Out of your past, an Old Friend.
One to last, one, just like me!

Created by
Cheri Cami LeBren
Reposted
May 19, 2004
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"We are all alone until we accept
our need for others"

"Friendly Smiles"



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JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND

Contributed by lovingcritters on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:04:12 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry





"JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND"

When I was 3, small, and not very tall.
I loved creatures of all sizes, shapes, and form.
No one taught me this,
Was just natural for me, was just "Norm"

Butterflies, grasshoppers, snakes,
birds, kitties, puppies, anything alive.
I doctored them when they were sick,
With lots of love, helped them survive.

One day I ventured down an alley
Located behind my house.
There I found cement "Ash Pits" all around.
They were the best "stopping places" in town!


This is an "ashpit" where you burn your trash.

I'd catch everyone early, as they emptied their trash.
I met all the neighbors in one big "Flash!"
We'd visit, laugh, and sometimes cry.
I found I loved people!
It didn't make a difference to me why?

I never saw their outsides
Nor the clothes they would wear.
I sensed their "insides."
Their hearts, their souls, and I'd care!

"Just Let Me Be Your Friend!"
Was the message I emitted to all!
I'm not too little to have friends.
I may not be very wise,
But my heart is filled with love,
If only you would open your eyes!

Seems strange somehow now.
As I recall those years gone by.
I'm 64 years older, and with a sigh.....
I can honestly say, I haven't changed.
I've been rearranged, but my heart is still in tact.

"Just Let Me Be Your Friend."
To love you, to care, to always be there.....
My heart is still filled with love.
The best way to keep it there,
Is to give it away, and to share.

And so my dear friend.
Little did you know when you paid your fee.
You'd find a True Friend.
Out of your past, an Old Friend.
One to last, one, just like me!

Created by
Cheri Cami LeBren
Reposted
May 19, 2004
``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````
"We are all alone until we accept
our need for others"

"Friendly Smiles"







Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2004-05-13 02:04:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:10:21 AM AEST
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Beautifully done..


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:21:53 AM AEST
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This is lovely, sweet and absolutely adorable!
We need good friends, they are like food to our souls!
Hugs,
Hur


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:36:35 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. A true friend , hard to find and even harder to keep. I am so pleased that you have re-found your childhood friend may you keep the bond that you tied so long ago.

bernard.


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:03:48 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful. All of your writing shows how special you are.

Thank you for sharing this, that first picture reminds me of my Grandmothers house and her precious Hummels.

Chris


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:26:04 AM AEST
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aaww bless you sounded like a very sweet little girl to me and you've grown up to be a swwet lady aww...this is really cute! with a lovely message for all


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by Loyalist on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:22:55 AM AEST
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A nice tribute to friendship!


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:57:12 PM AEST
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Wow, mom u haven't changed a bit. You've always been here in a flash.
U still emit luv where ever u go.
that's jus one reason, mom, that I luv u so.
Beautifull write.
luv, huggs,
your brat,
emy


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:16:16 PM AEST
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How precious and just like you, my sweet friend. You are one in a million.

Rita


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:52:25 AM AEST
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this is really precious connie, and its true, you are wonderful with people and a shining ray of light to all whos lives you touch:) hugs n' love you, nessa x

@->>->:-


Re: JUST LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:00:03 AM AEST
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Critters, this is beautiful. What a great tribute to your friend. *S* Cynthia




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