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Array ( [sid] => 47269 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => wise old woman of light [time] => 2004-05-12 22:10:14 [hometext] => most of my poetry is so much different from eachother. i've had people not realize that i wrote sum of the things that i have written [bodytext] => 'wise old woman
of the younder light
give me the power
of eternal light.'

'so when i am old and grey
like you
i'll always have the power
to know what to do.'

'and when i look
into their eyes
i'll know the truth
behind all lies.'

'i know the consiquenses
of what i ask
just grant me this wish
of that i ask.'

then one word
she said at last
was 'yes' and then
i sighed at last.

it felt so strainge
to see the past
to see the future
the present at last. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 40 [informant] => shorty_52 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

wise old woman of light

Contributed by shorty_52 on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:10:14 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

'wise old woman
of the younder light
give me the power
of eternal light.'

'so when i am old and grey
like you
i'll always have the power
to know what to do.'

'and when i look
into their eyes
i'll know the truth
behind all lies.'

'i know the consiquenses
of what i ask
just grant me this wish
of that i ask.'

then one word
she said at last
was 'yes' and then
i sighed at last.

it felt so strainge
to see the past
to see the future
the present at last.

Copyright © shorty_52 ... [ 2004-05-12 22:10:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: wise old woman of light (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:18:49 PM AEST
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Good thoughts. Life and its spirits will take you where you want to go if you are true in your heart and soul. Always look for enlightenment and search for truth. It cannot evade you.

Rita

Re: wise old woman of light (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:30:37 PM AEST
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Oh..I loved this.. Not sure of your style..haven't read enough of your porms, I don't think..but that will be remedied soon..
Jenni

Re: wise old woman of light (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:55:39 PM AEST
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I liked this! It would be nice to be all-seeing and all-knowing. Thankyou for the smile ; 0 ) Thumps

Re: wise old woman of light (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:50:11 PM AEST
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Wow I Love This One !!!!!!! Its Really Good ....
Totally Awesome Write :-) Keep Em Coming
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