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Array ( [sid] => 47253 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Sinners Life [time] => 2004-05-12 20:46:29 [hometext] => What would you call this... [bodytext] => Things and beings.
Shadows and light.
All live togther in harmony.
Good nor evil.
Disease, pain and hunger.
Stress and selfdestruction.
Watch over me.
My fallen angel.
This is my chance to pull the trigger.
Soon i'll fall away from here.
Without remorse.
With no wordly possesions.
Feeling weak.
Warmth leaving my body.
The light is passing.
Cold and dark I grow.
Only to live one life.
I wasted on myself and not others.
Blood sweat and tears.
Bottle those emotions.
Im weak.
Were all weak.
We break and take.
Waste and spoil.
What we could glady give to others.
The day has come.
Our sins arent forgiven.
Darkness falls.
All good perish.
Death consumes us.
We fall faster and faster.
Were going home.
But wheres home.
In our pain.
Pain is all we know.
It makes us not who we are but what we are.
Ice coldy hands wrap my throat.
I give one last attempt to gasp for air.
I fail.
And fade into the evil, the dark and the lost. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Mortis-Dark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Sinners Life

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:46:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Things and beings.
Shadows and light.
All live togther in harmony.
Good nor evil.
Disease, pain and hunger.
Stress and selfdestruction.
Watch over me.
My fallen angel.
This is my chance to pull the trigger.
Soon i'll fall away from here.
Without remorse.
With no wordly possesions.
Feeling weak.
Warmth leaving my body.
The light is passing.
Cold and dark I grow.
Only to live one life.
I wasted on myself and not others.
Blood sweat and tears.
Bottle those emotions.
Im weak.
Were all weak.
We break and take.
Waste and spoil.
What we could glady give to others.
The day has come.
Our sins arent forgiven.
Darkness falls.
All good perish.
Death consumes us.
We fall faster and faster.
Were going home.
But wheres home.
In our pain.
Pain is all we know.
It makes us not who we are but what we are.
Ice coldy hands wrap my throat.
I give one last attempt to gasp for air.
I fail.
And fade into the evil, the dark and the lost.

Copyright © Mortis-Dark ... [ 2004-05-12 20:46:29]
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Re: A Sinners Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:52:59 PM AEST
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another dark and moody write from Mortis. Gloomy as always, I love it!

Re: A Sinners Life (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:35:47 PM AEST
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This started off pretty good, got better, and ended magnificently. Beautifully dark and --especially the end-- something that makes you think . . .

"Pain is all we know.
It makes us not who we are but what we are."

--wow. Those two lines . . . wow. Beautiful and certainly something to think about.

Niiiiiiiiice.

--Nora

Re: A Sinners Life (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:56:02 PM AEST
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i agree with nora.
this poem was f*cking awesome!
wow. im speechless.
loved this one.
Arden

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