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Unexpected, I stumbled into your arms
As if you had been waiting forever
Our eyes met and seemed familiar
Recognition of souls complimented one another
Against the Mediterranean blue sky
You shot a hundred pictures
Capturing warm breezes and sparkling water
While I wrote the words to your smile
This is magic I thought, how can this be?
Your laugh touched me with a genuine caress
We walked along the beach at sunset
Playing in the waves like children, teasing each other
Before that first kiss turns the laughter to passion
We saw it coming with the rising of the moon
Dropped all pretense of playing
As I swayed in your arms, tasting your kiss
Wanting this moment to last a lifetime…..

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Falling

Contributed by merry on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:38:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



*******************************

Unexpected, I stumbled into your arms
As if you had been waiting forever
Our eyes met and seemed familiar
Recognition of souls complimented one another
Against the Mediterranean blue sky
You shot a hundred pictures
Capturing warm breezes and sparkling water
While I wrote the words to your smile
This is magic I thought, how can this be?
Your laugh touched me with a genuine caress
We walked along the beach at sunset
Playing in the waves like children, teasing each other
Before that first kiss turns the laughter to passion
We saw it coming with the rising of the moon
Dropped all pretense of playing
As I swayed in your arms, tasting your kiss
Wanting this moment to last a lifetime…..





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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:47:02 PM AEST
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Ahhhh, that connection...the soulmate...is it real? Is it a lie? Is it forever? Is it a mistake? How can it be a mistake? Would a mistake feel like this? I've never felt this connection before. Surely we were once joined at the heart...destined to return to each other. Sorry, I'm rambling. Let's just say I know this well. Another excellent write.
Stitch


Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:59:49 PM AEST
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oooo how romantic! the mediterranean blue sky, warm breezes, sparkling water! (sand in the tooshie!) this is another fine example of your talent and poetic beauty, hugs n' love, sisters in spirit, nessa

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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:05:51 PM AEST
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How romantic, and the setting was fantastic.
Oh the joy of being in love. :)


Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:38:55 PM AEST
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Whoa . . .

Romantic, beautiful, vivid . . . what more is there to say?

I'm impressed.

--Nora


Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:15:01 PM AEST
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what a beautiful display of love... i wish moments could last forever a lot of times... its ashame you can freeze time.......


Re: Falling (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 03:19:48 PM AEST
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What a climax....you must have experienced it, to write such a colorfull picture....silhuetted against the falling sun - could almost smell the breeze and taste the salt, against my lips.
Admirer---


Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 08:08:24 PM AEST
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Beautifully told! There is magic in it... everything is magic when you know it truly for the first time. Too bad we don't remember it.
Excellent piece!
Andrew




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