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Array ( [sid] => 47226 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My fault [time] => 2004-05-12 16:38:32 [hometext] => so im **** so if this doesnt really flow GET OVER IT!!!!! [bodytext] => wishing i was dead
feel the cool streak
of your razor
its you who pushed me here
its you who took everything
thats what i tell myself
when i find
that theres no one else
its ALL my fault
the scars
all the tears cried
all the blood spilt
my mom being angry
ruining her marrige
its my fault
i cant blame you
how could i?
you never knew
never let you see
this side of me
the one who
cries
wishing she was dead
people say
"its all in your head"
but is it really?
and if so
how come i cant change it
push re-wind
start all over
make sure everythings right
but i cant
so i shall
write the last sceen
with a quick
slit of my wrist [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 61 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

My fault

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

wishing i was dead
feel the cool streak
of your razor
its you who pushed me here
its you who took everything
thats what i tell myself
when i find
that theres no one else
its ALL my fault
the scars
all the tears cried
all the blood spilt
my mom being angry
ruining her marrige
its my fault
i cant blame you
how could i?
you never knew
never let you see
this side of me
the one who
cries
wishing she was dead
people say
"its all in your head"
but is it really?
and if so
how come i cant change it
push re-wind
start all over
make sure everythings right
but i cant
so i shall
write the last sceen
with a quick
slit of my wrist

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2004-05-12 16:38:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My fault (User Rating: 1 )
by honeyrain on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:45:30 PM AEST
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i liked your poem.it dont matta if it aint got flow,i still liked it.I liked the ending too.

Re: My fault (User Rating: 1 )
by XxPerfectlySanexX on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:52:19 PM AEST
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Hey.
I liked your poem - they don't always need to rhyme by the way, or go with the flow.
The fact you showed real feelings is more than anyone can expect - I like, very much.
Whatever has happened in your life, I hope things pick up soon. Good luck for the future.

PerfectlySanex

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