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But it’s a lonely road to take
Who’ll watch your back, tell you it’s ok
When you find the mistakes you’re bound to make

Who’ll share with you the good times
But more importantly, the bad
You stand alone, with broken wings
Wishing for something you’ve never had

They say the eyes are the gateway to the heart
And yours are filled with pain
Quietly, you pull up your hood
And step into the hard cold rain

Secluded beneath your foreboding exterior
Hides desperation and fear of the unknown
You shroud your eyes and harden your heart
Because at the end of the day, you know you’ll stand alone.
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You Stand Alone

Contributed by Tanna on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:18:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You say that you need no one
But it’s a lonely road to take
Who’ll watch your back, tell you it’s ok
When you find the mistakes you’re bound to make

Who’ll share with you the good times
But more importantly, the bad
You stand alone, with broken wings
Wishing for something you’ve never had

They say the eyes are the gateway to the heart
And yours are filled with pain
Quietly, you pull up your hood
And step into the hard cold rain

Secluded beneath your foreboding exterior
Hides desperation and fear of the unknown
You shroud your eyes and harden your heart
Because at the end of the day, you know you’ll stand alone.

Copyright Â© Tanna ... [ 2004-05-12 00:18:17]
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Re: You Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:46:00 AM AEST
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A sorrowful feeling comes...its a captivating poem..welldone Tanna, ..venkat

Re: You Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:57:10 AM AEST
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This is sad, sometimes we all need just a few minutes to ourselves. but when it comes to someone saying they rather be alone then with someone it is hard to take. great poem. sandy

Re: You Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:57:08 AM AEST
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NICE POEM WRITTEN WITH ALOT OF HEART!
DAN.

Re: You Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 07:50:50 AM AEST
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I liked it, good job! Keep up the good work. ~Stace~

Re: You Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:27:36 AM AEST
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a great write, i could visualise alot of it. i can relate to it too. i thought it was the best road to take. i was wrong.

well donr. phil xxx

Re: You Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Cursed_Witch on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:24:06 PM AEST
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Bravo.... i can relate to most of the stuff u said

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