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Who tempt me through the night and day
Yet so meaningless to me
When compared to all I see

Witness do I all such strengths
As we spend our time in lengths
How I enjoy his company
A spirit kindred and true is he

Yet still, he wastes his pleasant charms
He cares not who is in his arms
Hoping he will someday see
To my heart, he holds a key

Doubting on my door he’d knock
On the shelf sits my heart’s lock
It's his love for which I plea
But I’m just its casualty [comments] => 6 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 33 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

My Dark Horse

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Stony grey and blue are they
Who tempt me through the night and day
Yet so meaningless to me
When compared to all I see

Witness do I all such strengths
As we spend our time in lengths
How I enjoy his company
A spirit kindred and true is he

Yet still, he wastes his pleasant charms
He cares not who is in his arms
Hoping he will someday see
To my heart, he holds a key

Doubting on my door he’d knock
On the shelf sits my heart’s lock
It's his love for which I plea
But I’m just its casualty

Copyright Â© liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-05-11 18:19:43]
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Re: My Dark Horse (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:53:05 PM AEST
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Liquid, Don't take this too seriously if he's still sowing oats. An insightful write. I like the flow and movement through it.
Stitch

Re: My Dark Horse (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:17:23 PM AEST
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I do hope for HIS sake he'll wake up and see what a beautiful person you are and what he's missing.Very heartlfelt poem I could relate to in a way,I enjoyed it from beginning to end.Keep posting,
PumpkinPie

Re: My Dark Horse (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 06:10:07 AM AEST
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it's great
and if everything settles down a little bit, I'd say(but I dought I have to) go for it
a GREAT write though; good flow
keep it up
Love,
Jared

Re: My Dark Horse (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:38:18 PM AEST
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Great write, sunshine, and... it's very mysterious.... I like it...

Jaime

Re: My Dark Horse (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:37:45 PM AEST
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Interesting title!
Ah, what a strange whirlwind the youth of life is!
(have I said that before?)
Andrew

Re: My Dark Horse (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:36:11 PM AEST
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Ten stinking days, Andrew, ten stinking days...
But the poem was really well written. But you may want to watch your heart a little more closely.
Take care.
David

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