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Eccentric Freinds
Contributed by
Thivanka
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:48:35 AM in AEST
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Eccentric Friends.
Hot was the weather-cold was my friend,
He & I together, had this peculiar trend
To hold hands and tiptoe in the burning sand,
Our chortling would spread across the whole land.
Little children would laugh heartily,
‘Young adults’ carousing, a kind of perversity,
For we would sneak off, with their clothing and shoes,
While they reveled merrily in the pool.
Little they were, and shyness was distant;
Pursuing our tracks, fully naked,
Dancing behind us, a nudist colony,
Enjoying the pursue, we ran, jovially!
Hot was the weather-cold was my friend,
As I recall the past times we spent,
Cold he is, cold as can be,
In his grave, having fun without me.
-Thivanka
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Re: Eccentric Freinds
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:05:43 AM AEST
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| Good poem extremely well written. Thanks foa very good read. |
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Re: Eccentric Freinds
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:25:01 AM AEST
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| Aah..what a happy walk on burning sands..no problem when there is a good friend..lol.. well written..really a good read. venkat |
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Re: Eccentric Freinds
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:14:04 AM AEST
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Good write..good read...
Very well done!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Eccentric Freinds
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:57:45 AM AEST
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this poem is e x c e l l e n t, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Eccentric Freinds
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by Mihiri on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:47:47 AM AEST
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| Good stuff! Very nicely written! [Hondata vachana amunala]! lol!! C ya l8er! Luv, Mihiri |
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