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[aid] => mick
[title] => Unopened Eyes
[time] => 2004-05-11 01:17:04
[hometext] => This is a poem about not taking life and the people around you for granted. Please tell me what you think of it. If you have any suggestions as to how I could improve this poem, your constructive criticism would be greatly apreciated.
[bodytext] => With no warning, your eyes close The void becomes never-ending. A turmoil of despondency enthralling me eternally The gates, sealed Never knowing of parallel souls intertwined in rhapsodic beauty A splendour, discovered upon the wonder’s demise Repentantly unappreciated, last minutes, futile Distorting fog, abating in the moments, in the time of concluding despair Possible ecstasies, indiscoverable Oysters, forever remaining unopened Stars forget to shimmer, owing to unasked wishes You ceased to learn, to hear of admiration Captivated perpetually with regret Knowingly, the eyes never resurrect [comments] => 3 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MarlissEGeesE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 130 [ratings] => 27 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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