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Array ( [sid] => 47003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => off World [time] => 2004-05-10 22:44:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => NO ONE to talk to
NO ONE to turn to
NO ONE who'll uinderstand these
feeling pent up inside
NO best friend
NO vent
NO ONE that i trust
NO ONE that trusts me
NO ONE to cry to
without reason
unless suddenly thought of as not me
NO ONE who understands
NOT ONE PERSON I TRUST

NO ONE to run to
NO ONE to take me in

some say they understand
say we're the same
WE'RE NOT.
I see the fake, hiding inside of you so your image wont rot
I see you trying to change me, make me as insecure as you

I see it.
I don't want it
SO OFF [comments] => 5 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 32 [informant] => PaperCut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

off World

Contributed by PaperCut on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:44:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

NO ONE to talk to
NO ONE to turn to
NO ONE who'll uinderstand these
feeling pent up inside
NO best friend
NO vent
NO ONE that i trust
NO ONE that trusts me
NO ONE to cry to
without reason
unless suddenly thought of as not me
NO ONE who understands
NOT ONE PERSON I TRUST

NO ONE to run to
NO ONE to take me in

some say they understand
say we're the same
WE'RE NOT.
I see the fake, hiding inside of you so your image wont rot
I see you trying to change me, make me as insecure as you

I see it.
I don't want it
SO OFF

Copyright © PaperCut ... [ 2004-05-10 22:44:40]
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Re: off World (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:47:11 AM AEST
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Very good write!

Re: off World (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:45:37 AM AEST
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good stuff

Re: off World (User Rating: 1 )
by BinkCaesar on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:26:12 PM AEST
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"NO ONE that trusts me
NO ONE to cry to"

Hey you--I'm here+ I 'll do the best i can to listen if you wanna talk.

Re: off World (User Rating: 1 )
by PaperCut on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:03:18 PM AEST
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1-i dont write poems cuz mine suck
2-these are old. i had them in a book, then i caught my mom reading them. when i got ***** she said i shouldnt have any privacy or secrets from her.

Re: off World (User Rating: 1 )
by PaperCut on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:04:18 PM AEST
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oh, and its f*** off world, and the last line is so f*** off. they wouldnt let me put it in

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