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Array ( [sid] => 47002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waiting [time] => 2004-05-10 22:37:55 [hometext] => um...yea. im a really bad writer/speller so leave me alone. this is my ranting section! [bodytext] => All these thoughts flying through my head,
Thoughts i shouldn't have,
Thoughts i wish i didn't have.
Want to understand what's wrong,
To not be left in the dark.
Want you to stop hinting,
Want you to expose the truth.
Don't want to be left alone,
Feeling my way though the dark.
Want to be given some kind of clue,
to your thoughts.
Some kind of light
to guide me through the corridors of your mind.
Hate feeling for the light switch,
Forcing you to talk.
Supposed to be more than friends,
How does that work?
Never talk, wont explain, wont laugh.
I feel useless.
not sure if i even love you.
Just afraid to be wrong,
Afraid to be dropped first,
Afraid to be cheated on.
Don't want to be left alone in the dark,
Sitting here
While the world around me falls apart. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 32 [informant] => PaperCut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Waiting

Contributed by PaperCut on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

All these thoughts flying through my head,
Thoughts i shouldn't have,
Thoughts i wish i didn't have.
Want to understand what's wrong,
To not be left in the dark.
Want you to stop hinting,
Want you to expose the truth.
Don't want to be left alone,
Feeling my way though the dark.
Want to be given some kind of clue,
to your thoughts.
Some kind of light
to guide me through the corridors of your mind.
Hate feeling for the light switch,
Forcing you to talk.
Supposed to be more than friends,
How does that work?
Never talk, wont explain, wont laugh.
I feel useless.
not sure if i even love you.
Just afraid to be wrong,
Afraid to be dropped first,
Afraid to be cheated on.
Don't want to be left alone in the dark,
Sitting here
While the world around me falls apart.

Copyright © PaperCut ... [ 2004-05-10 22:37:55]
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Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:40:23 PM AEST
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Great write!

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:11:58 AM AEST
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You're really great at expressing your feelings, whether through poems, writing, or just saying it. thank you for being able to share.

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by BinkCaesar on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:21:44 PM AEST
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that comment up ther ^^, thats from me. i know im somewhat like the person in your poem, i often hints at things without explanation and other things like that, so for that, i be sorry.

--Love you
----caesar

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:30:52 PM AEST
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I like this - a lot. Maybe it's because I was open to it, having come here from "Please". Or maybe it's because I can relate. Or--- maybe, because it's just simply good. I think it's all three of those things combined! Good write!

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