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Array ( [sid] => 46994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Me Free [time] => 2004-05-10 21:34:50 [hometext] => I wrote this about a friend of mine that was willing to listen to anybody's problems-but wouldn't tell a soul about what she went through [bodytext] => Don’t you want to tell someone,
those feelings that you have?
Those feelings that lay on your heart,
suffocating your soul?
Consuming the joy of living,
Overpowering your will to survive,
don’t you wish someone would understand?
don’t you wish someone could uncork
all that’s confined inside yourself?
Bottled up so tightly you cannot let those feelings out.
so tight and constricting,
too much to hold at once.
Don’t you wish someone could open your heart,
giving your problems to the world,
letting them go, opening your soul,
Turning the key to open the lock
That imprisons your life, your childhood and your sanity.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Esther [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Let Me Free

Contributed by Esther on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 09:34:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Don’t you want to tell someone,
those feelings that you have?
Those feelings that lay on your heart,
suffocating your soul?
Consuming the joy of living,
Overpowering your will to survive,
don’t you wish someone would understand?
don’t you wish someone could uncork
all that’s confined inside yourself?
Bottled up so tightly you cannot let those feelings out.
so tight and constricting,
too much to hold at once.
Don’t you wish someone could open your heart,
giving your problems to the world,
letting them go, opening your soul,
Turning the key to open the lock
That imprisons your life, your childhood and your sanity.

Copyright Â© Esther ... [ 2004-05-10 21:34:50]
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Re: Let Me Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 09:48:32 PM AEST
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good questions...we all need someone to trust and be able to tell our soul to
shari

Re: Let Me Free (User Rating: 1 )
by StarSpark on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:02:50 PM AEST
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i can actually relate to the person your writing about, and as much as you'd want to let it all out, you dont want the world to know, it's easier to listen to other peoples problems, then express your own. Good Write tho..

Re: Let Me Free (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:22:37 PM AEST
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No, I'm afraid the world couldn't take it...like a bad jen..if it gets out then my cloud of darkness may consume the world. On a lighter note...Great Write!!!

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