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Array ( [sid] => 46953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => wasted [time] => 2004-05-10 18:05:25 [hometext] => dunno if this will appeal to anyone but its worth a try [bodytext] => you say that you want me to change but i not sure that i can...all the writing is written on the wall..and everything that i wanted to show you has fallen among the blackness of your heart

now im falling farther away from where i used to be... i feel so used... just a little abused...i sit here and stare at the wall all night wondering why im so wasted

she yells across the room till her voice begins to break you never felt of any use to her.. now she says its true..she drowns you out and strangles out the screams you make to break the silence

now your falling farther away from where you used to be... you feel so used...just a little abused...you sit there and stare at the wall all night and wonder why your so wasted

if it wasnt for the clock on the wall time would just pass us by but im here and your here..time's not gonna stop and die...yet we're so wasted..

now we're falling farther away from where we used to be...we feel so used...just a little abused...we sit and stare at the wall all night and wonder why we're so wasted

so wasted [comments] => 3 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 34 [informant] => angel_facing_judgement [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
wasted

Contributed by angel_facing_judgement on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



you say that you want me to change but i not sure that i can...all the writing is written on the wall..and everything that i wanted to show you has fallen among the blackness of your heart

now im falling farther away from where i used to be... i feel so used... just a little abused...i sit here and stare at the wall all night wondering why im so wasted

she yells across the room till her voice begins to break you never felt of any use to her.. now she says its true..she drowns you out and strangles out the screams you make to break the silence

now your falling farther away from where you used to be... you feel so used...just a little abused...you sit there and stare at the wall all night and wonder why your so wasted

if it wasnt for the clock on the wall time would just pass us by but im here and your here..time's not gonna stop and die...yet we're so wasted..

now we're falling farther away from where we used to be...we feel so used...just a little abused...we sit and stare at the wall all night and wonder why we're so wasted

so wasted




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Re: wasted (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:01:39 PM AEST
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Good write over all.


Re: wasted (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:24:39 PM AEST
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You did a very good job. Keep up the good work. I liked it a lot. -Stace-


Re: wasted (User Rating: 1 )
by DirtyFool on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:10:20 PM AEST
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Very good! i liked it alot
elizabeth




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