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Array ( [sid] => 46921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am [time] => 2004-05-10 14:16:40 [hometext] => i appologize if u don't understand,just a few basic random thoughts,enjoy [bodytext] => apart of me is gone,its hard to move on
seeing you everyday me off,everytime
i turn around i see you,you're so happy

its been so long without my dad by my side
he's never been there while i've cried
i've been trying to survive
i guess i'm doing real good cuz i'm still alive

living here i am so pathetic,(it's ok)
living here i am so crazy,(each day)
living here i am so up,(it's ok)

some dirty was my friend,i'll
never admit that ever again,Hey
shut your ugly face and your legs

the man of my dreams will never understand
just how much i wanna hold his hand
even just for one night,is that ok?
let me know so i can walk away

living here i am so pathetic,(it's ok)
living here i am so crazy,(each day)
living here i am so up,(its ok)

day to day it gets harder and harder
to live in this society,i'm so proud
i haven't let go yet,but i think me
letting go is gonna happen soon [comments] => 4 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 48 [informant] => cheech [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I am

Contributed by cheech on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:16:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



apart of me is gone,its hard to move on
seeing you everyday me off,everytime
i turn around i see you,you're so happy

its been so long without my dad by my side
he's never been there while i've cried
i've been trying to survive
i guess i'm doing real good cuz i'm still alive

living here i am so pathetic,(it's ok)
living here i am so crazy,(each day)
living here i am so up,(it's ok)

some dirty was my friend,i'll
never admit that ever again,Hey
shut your ugly face and your legs

the man of my dreams will never understand
just how much i wanna hold his hand
even just for one night,is that ok?
let me know so i can walk away

living here i am so pathetic,(it's ok)
living here i am so crazy,(each day)
living here i am so up,(its ok)

day to day it gets harder and harder
to live in this society,i'm so proud
i haven't let go yet,but i think me
letting go is gonna happen soon




Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-05-10 14:16:40]
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Re: I am (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:22:25 PM AEST
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Life happens good and bad, I hope you don't let go because you would miss the good part.


Re: I am (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:37:47 PM AEST
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Great write! Wonderfully done!


Re: I am (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:44:56 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem, (no gratitous use of the word love :)lol)
I loved the repition or chorus it really empazed the power of the poem, and it kinda sticks in ur head


Re: I am (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:56:33 PM AEST
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Makes perfect sense to me.
very good writing.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy




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