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Array ( [sid] => 46918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memories of an Old Man [time] => 2004-05-10 13:52:31 [hometext] => This is about my grandfather and what I think about when I see him [bodytext] => My grandfather was a young man
A reinforcer of a universal dream
Hardened as he watched comrades die
A fighter of the Nazi regime

He returned home a hero
But aged slowly with his memories
A husband, then a father
A hero of his own adversities

He watched his children grow
No longer dependent on his words of wisdom
Seemingly seeking their own truths
Creating an everlasting conundrum

His aged eyes hold my stare
As my tears refuse to flow
A silent understanding forms between us
That his memories are mine to know

My father looks at me the same way
His understanding of his own father's madness
His own memories rewind and play
As I grow into his gladness

My grandfather's memories haunt him
A never-ending storm
As he watches my father watch me grow
And I watch them as my own life forms

My grandfather is a hero
But before his life lights dim
I want him to know his memories are mine
And I will never forsake him [comments] => 8 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 38 [informant] => UnfallenTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )
Memories of an Old Man

Contributed by UnfallenTears on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:52:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes



My grandfather was a young man
A reinforcer of a universal dream
Hardened as he watched comrades die
A fighter of the Nazi regime

He returned home a hero
But aged slowly with his memories
A husband, then a father
A hero of his own adversities

He watched his children grow
No longer dependent on his words of wisdom
Seemingly seeking their own truths
Creating an everlasting conundrum

His aged eyes hold my stare
As my tears refuse to flow
A silent understanding forms between us
That his memories are mine to know

My father looks at me the same way
His understanding of his own father's madness
His own memories rewind and play
As I grow into his gladness

My grandfather's memories haunt him
A never-ending storm
As he watches my father watch me grow
And I watch them as my own life forms

My grandfather is a hero
But before his life lights dim
I want him to know his memories are mine
And I will never forsake him




Copyright © UnfallenTears ... [ 2004-05-10 13:52:31]
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Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:57:07 PM AEST
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This is EXCELLENT! Wonderfully done!


Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:13:37 PM AEST
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beautiful write.... especially the last stanza... 2 months ago my grandfather lost his battle with life and I wish I had written that...



Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:43:17 PM AEST
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absolutley brilliant!


Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:02:47 PM AEST
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A beautiful dedication to a great man.
Well done.I can feel how proud you are of him.


Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 04:42:52 PM AEST
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what a beautiful loving poem:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->-


Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 06:25:16 AM AEST
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A warm and touching write....
Jenni


Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:38:54 PM AEST
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Wonderful tribute to a great man. Well written. :)


Re: Memories of an Old Man (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:16:22 AM AEST
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this is a wonderful poem, but is it supposed to make me cry twice?




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