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Array ( [sid] => 469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Open [time] => 2002-07-15 10:52:39 [hometext] => This one goes out to my future mother in law [bodytext] =>

Open your heart to me
You won’t be disappointed I’m sure
There’s something I want you to see
But if you remain so closed up, you’ll miss it for sure

Open your ears to me, and hear what I have to say
I know they say we won’t get along
But it doesn’t have to be that way
One of my biggest prides is my ability to prove people wrong

Open your arms to me, and allow me inside
I promise you, I won’t do anything wrong
I’ll be perfect in her eyes
If you listen really closely, you might even hear me sing her a song

Open your door to me if nothing more
Should I stay in your home overnight?
She can have the bed I’ll gladly lay on the floor
So long as her face, is what I see, come morning light

Just please…. Open to me
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Open

Contributed by J_Ganey on Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 10:52:39 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Open your heart to me
You won’t be disappointed I’m sure
There’s something I want you to see
But if you remain so closed up, you’ll miss it for sure

Open your ears to me, and hear what I have to say
I know they say we won’t get along
But it doesn’t have to be that way
One of my biggest prides is my ability to prove people wrong

Open your arms to me, and allow me inside
I promise you, I won’t do anything wrong
I’ll be perfect in her eyes
If you listen really closely, you might even hear me sing her a song

Open your door to me if nothing more
Should I stay in your home overnight?
She can have the bed I’ll gladly lay on the floor
So long as her face, is what I see, come morning light

Just please…. Open to me

Copyright Â© J_Ganey ... [ 2002-07-15 10:52:39]
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Re: Open (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:02:24 PM AEST
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sweet poem..Did she finally accept you? I bet she did.
great write.

jackee_line

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