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Array ( [sid] => 46896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I didnt hear you breathing [time] => 2004-05-10 11:20:36 [hometext] => oh Nan,, The pain of losing any loved one, for you..x.. RIP [bodytext] => Did you know we came today jus to say hello, even when they said you'd gone, still we didnt go...
Are you Listening to me up there? did you know we cried, they said you'd want us happy believe me that we tried,
how could a heart stop beating they said it be old age, but now i see that young free bird your spirit has left the cage,
To me you looked so different, then again its just a shell, i pretended you were sleeping and hoped i couldnt tell,
it broke my heart to see you, his pain shown by a tear, I hope your happy reunited up there as i know you cant be here..!
In our hearts you'll stay and sometimes when we frown, We can look to bluest of skies and know your looking down,
I hope your sleep now peaceful and this is sent with love, I picture you with smiles again I picture you above..!!

Louisa Montagu - In Memory of (E.R & E.M) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 65 [informant] => LouisaMontagu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
I didnt hear you breathing

Contributed by LouisaMontagu on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:20:36 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



Did you know we came today jus to say hello, even when they said you'd gone, still we didnt go...
Are you Listening to me up there? did you know we cried, they said you'd want us happy believe me that we tried,
how could a heart stop beating they said it be old age, but now i see that young free bird your spirit has left the cage,
To me you looked so different, then again its just a shell, i pretended you were sleeping and hoped i couldnt tell,
it broke my heart to see you, his pain shown by a tear, I hope your happy reunited up there as i know you cant be here..!
In our hearts you'll stay and sometimes when we frown, We can look to bluest of skies and know your looking down,
I hope your sleep now peaceful and this is sent with love, I picture you with smiles again I picture you above..!!

Louisa Montagu - In Memory of (E.R & E.M)




Copyright © LouisaMontagu ... [ 2004-05-10 11:20:36]
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Re: I didnt hear you breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:24:05 AM AEST
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beautiful dedication...
thanks for sharing...


Re: I didnt hear you breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:03:44 PM AEST
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this is so sad...really powerfull...


Re: I didnt hear you breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:49:40 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful Im so sorry for your loss but keep her alive in your fond memories they are what sustain us and pull us through.

Michelle




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