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Array ( [sid] => 46892 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The memories will last! [time] => 2004-05-10 10:40:27 [hometext] => Written for my nephew his friend passed away in a fire he was only 20 years old!I wrote this for him as though he wrote the poem about his friend! [bodytext] => I can't believe your gone so fast,
I just talked to you the other day,
But my memories of you will forever last,
that cant be taken away,
We grew up together,
hanging out & having fun,
staying up playing Monopoly till late,
making plans on things that need to be done,
talking about girls we wanted to date,
Our Graduating pictures our moms made us do,
will stick in my mind forever,
In our caps & gowns,just me & you,
Is something I will treasure,
I can't grasp a hold that my friend is gone,
It just does'nt seem fair,
Your life here was'nt that long,
but our memories will always be there.
Written for Josh [comments] => 5 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 55 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

The memories will last!

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I can't believe your gone so fast,
I just talked to you the other day,
But my memories of you will forever last,
that cant be taken away,
We grew up together,
hanging out & having fun,
staying up playing Monopoly till late,
making plans on things that need to be done,
talking about girls we wanted to date,
Our Graduating pictures our moms made us do,
will stick in my mind forever,
In our caps & gowns,just me & you,
Is something I will treasure,
I can't grasp a hold that my friend is gone,
It just does'nt seem fair,
Your life here was'nt that long,
but our memories will always be there.
Written for Josh

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2004-05-10 10:40:27]
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Re: The memories will last! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:42:58 AM AEST
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what an awful tragedy you brought his feelings alive in this poem Christina Im sending good thought to all of you so sorry this happened.

Michelle

Re: The memories will last! (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:15:01 AM AEST
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This is sad...
May he rest in peace.

Re: The memories will last! (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:20:07 AM AEST
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What a heart renching poem, I'm so sorry for his loss. One of my friends died last year. I know it's nothing like a life long friend dieing but I know what he's going through. What a lovely peom.

Re: The memories will last! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:31:18 PM AEST
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very sad christina, my sympathies.... hugs n' love nessa

Re: The memories will last! (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:59:07 PM AEST
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Chirstina, my heart goes out to you and your family. This is quite a tragedy. This is such a sentimental write. *S* Cynthia

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