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No more pretty pink innocence
Contributed by
Gothik_Twitch
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:30:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Ive been put through many razor blade romances
And ive sat in my butterfly chair
My crimson blood slowly splattered
On the black marble floor
My eyes are black and crying
My arms are sore and red
I wish I could stop this razorblade smile
So I could live on
The shiny metal is reflecting its light
Telling me its ready to be used
But my arms and legs arnt
I wish I had a choice to ask for help
But my dolly dosnt answer me when I call her
People call me freak and I need some love
But all I have is my razor blade tears
That’s all I need or is it?
My butterfly chair has tipped and im screaming for help
The black splattered tile is reflecting my face
Black tears fall from my eyes as my mascara drowns
The hangman’s dreams have come to life and im hiding
Everything is going dark theres no where left to run
Im hiding my body from the evil one
Butterfly kisses and suicide
Leaving me so empty
The beast has turned pale almost like snow
Its eyes glimmer bright red and its nose flares flame
No one knows what its like to feel other peoples pain
No one else knows what I can see in other peoples eyes
The pain so unbearable I can hardly think
Suffocated lies and terrifying secrets
Everything so wrong
Its time to cry
Copyright ©
Gothik_Twitch
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2004-05-10 02:30:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No more pretty pink innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 04:55:08 AM AEST (User
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here you have some talent of dark poetic expression..keep writing.. venkat |
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Re: No more pretty pink innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:35:55 PM AEST (User
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this is a brilliant poem with so much truth in it.. if only everyone could understand these feelings.. i really looked this poem and the other ones of urs that ive read.. you're a great poet.. AMI JO |
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Re: No more pretty pink innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:32:13 AM AEST (User
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IT'S AN EXCELLENT POEM!!
where you've written,
"No one knows what its like to feel other peoples pain
No one else knows what I can see in other peoples eyes
The pain so unbearable I can hardly think
Suffocated lies and terrifying secrets
Everything so wrong
Its time to cry"
i think thats the best part, because it calls to me. it hold many truth's for me.
i wish those iggnorant people out there could realise it! |
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