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Array ( [sid] => 46863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => JaReD [time] => 2004-05-10 02:20:24 [hometext] => This is not exactly a poem, hell it didnt even start out as a poem. It's just my thoughts about love and someone in particular... It's not really even any good, but i thought i'd share... [bodytext] => Taking this opportunity to tell you all about:
*drum roll please* MY JaReD! If you can take
a minute to stop, close your eyes and think
about the PERFECT man, he's be the only
thing that could come to mind. This guy is not
only GORGEOUS. Yeah, that good. Plus, he's
a poet/writer and he plays DRUMS for not
one, not teo, but THREE local California
bands. OMG! Heaven! He is one of the
sweetest, most caring people you will ever come across. He'd rather have a great
conversation on the first, second, thrid date
then some GREAT PIECE OF ASS! He loves to cuddle. He pampers me completely. He
kisses by the book. Those kind of kisses that only Shakespeare could put into magical words. He's brilliant. He has more
knowledge (and I mean common sense, as well as book knowledge) then anyone else I
have ever met. He's nice and built. Has a
great personality. Awesome sense of humor. He knows how great it feels to be happy and
in love as well as down and just stinking depressed. he has a lot of life lessons and stories. He practices the Christian religion (not exactly that great) but it's mainly a way of keeping the faith. He's forgiving, nurturing and he wants children. He doesn't smoke (woohoo, finally!) cigarettes. He knows what a good time is. He loves awesome music.
Watches great movies. And... the best part about him is... he's mine. Love the thought of that. For now, all mine. *Dreamy Eyes* He's a perfect catch and damn it I caught him. Thats like the meaning of my life wrapped up into a
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JaReD

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:20:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Taking this opportunity to tell you all about:
*drum roll please* MY JaReD! If you can take
a minute to stop, close your eyes and think
about the PERFECT man, he's be the only
thing that could come to mind. This guy is not
only GORGEOUS. Yeah, that good. Plus, he's
a poet/writer and he plays DRUMS for not
one, not teo, but THREE local California
bands. OMG! Heaven! He is one of the
sweetest, most caring people you will ever come across. He'd rather have a great
conversation on the first, second, thrid date
then some GREAT PIECE OF ASS! He loves to cuddle. He pampers me completely. He
kisses by the book. Those kind of kisses that only Shakespeare could put into magical words. He's brilliant. He has more
knowledge (and I mean common sense, as well as book knowledge) then anyone else I
have ever met. He's nice and built. Has a
great personality. Awesome sense of humor. He knows how great it feels to be happy and
in love as well as down and just stinking depressed. he has a lot of life lessons and stories. He practices the Christian religion (not exactly that great) but it's mainly a way of keeping the faith. He's forgiving, nurturing and he wants children. He doesn't smoke (woohoo, finally!) cigarettes. He knows what a good time is. He loves awesome music.
Watches great movies. And... the best part about him is... he's mine. Love the thought of that. For now, all mine. *Dreamy Eyes* He's a perfect catch and damn it I caught him. Thats like the meaning of my life wrapped up into a
nice sized paragraph.




Copyright © strange_lindsey ... [ 2004-05-10 02:20:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:30:52 AM AEST
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i honestly really enjoyed this, such a unique way of expressing your love for someone, he sounds quite a multi-talented guy.

wildejohnny.


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:15:15 AM AEST
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awesome...
i found this piece to be a very original poetry format type thing...
it was quite enjoyable and different
to other things too..
unique i suppose...
well done!
*thumbs up*
katie
**********************************************
don't yell at your boyfriend
if he stares as i pass
cuz honey i can't help it
i was born with this ass!!!


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:37:40 AM AEST
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Hmmm, judging by your poem, I think you have a little crush lol Okay, so maybe it's a bit more than that!!

This is sweet to the core, and i'm happy you have caught such a genuinely good soul--you both deserve the joy that you bring one another. This definitely brought a smile to my face, and most likely made our buddy Jared the most envied man around ;-)

Truly,
-V.S.


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:35:46 AM AEST
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great declaration of love... reads more like a speech to me but what do I know? ;)


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:03:01 AM AEST
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sounds like you got bit bu the love bug isnt it great?? He sounds wonderful and i love the way you went about this its a different style enjoyable.
Best wishes to the both of you hold on tight for you have found a real man!!

Michelle


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:16:08 PM AEST
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lol lindsey! sounds like your very happy and thats so great to see, you deserve it and more, big hugs n' love nessa

@->>->-


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:29:38 AM AEST
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Any guy who loves to cuddle, pamper and kiss, and write poetry as well, sounds like perfection ... but then he's lucky to have found you too Lindsey - I wish you both all the very best ... hugs Jan


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:47:50 PM AEST
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*grins* Awwwww, Lindsey . . .

I completely echo every bit of what Jan said :). Nice job.

--Nora


Re: JaReD (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:33:09 PM AEST
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Aww, that is the sweetest thing I have EVER read! It sounds like both of you are very lucky....
It was nice to read that, I'm interested in people's love lives since I don't have one....lol.
You are very talented, Lindsey!

Blessings
Love, Jenna




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