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When moonlight dance within disguise
Dreams begin, in silent form
Awash of thoughts, a thinking storm

This storm shall rage, with whispered winds
A gentle breeze, to caress you sins
Your mind aloft, in clouds complex
Your heart to drown as thoughts perplex

Now a switch, to violent heat
Incubus stands, before your feet
A sensuous touch, of illusions might
From male to female, human delight

As quick as it started, your heat into cold
Your body reacts, the memories unfold
A nightmare of death, a coffin of lies
As dark as your thoughts, from deafening cries

Sweating with fear, you awake from your sleep
A child of twelve, you cry and you weep
You call out to the skies, pray to the storm
As you fly out the window and take a new form

From starry skies, when teardrops drift
Your mind bestows a thoughtful gift
It makes you laugh, it hears you cry
Realties thought, in illusions eye

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Illusions Eye

Contributed by forever_lonely on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

As teardrops drift from starry skies
When moonlight dance within disguise
Dreams begin, in silent form
Awash of thoughts, a thinking storm

This storm shall rage, with whispered winds
A gentle breeze, to caress you sins
Your mind aloft, in clouds complex
Your heart to drown as thoughts perplex

Now a switch, to violent heat
Incubus stands, before your feet
A sensuous touch, of illusions might
From male to female, human delight

As quick as it started, your heat into cold
Your body reacts, the memories unfold
A nightmare of death, a coffin of lies
As dark as your thoughts, from deafening cries

Sweating with fear, you awake from your sleep
A child of twelve, you cry and you weep
You call out to the skies, pray to the storm
As you fly out the window and take a new form

From starry skies, when teardrops drift
Your mind bestows a thoughtful gift
It makes you laugh, it hears you cry
Realties thought, in illusions eye

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-05-09 18:42:19]
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Re: Illusions Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:04:36 PM AEST
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wow and wow! luke, this is vividly intriging, i feel like i went on a journey and never left the mountain! lol, i just love your images and the whole poem is fantastic:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Illusions Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 08:17:13 PM AEST
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Very good poem. well written

Re: Illusions Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:41:34 AM AEST
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Another top class write. Vivid and enchanting.
Well done.

Re: Illusions Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:56:29 AM AEST
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Damn, I am way beyond impressed! I absolutely love the contrasting feel of this, with alternating visions of both felicity and nightmare. Toss in your always sterling technical prowess, and...you've fabricated a masterfully executed work or art.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: Illusions Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:49:39 AM AEST
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An impressive write ... with underlying sad images ... very intriguing poem ... Jan

Re: Illusions Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:45:53 PM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A HIT TO ME! THE UNKNOWN
IS ALMIGHTY BY ITSELF ALONE!! THE DARK STARTS WHERE THE LIGHT ONCE LEFT ITS MARK!!! GREAT ONE LUKE-AWESOME!!!!
DAN!!!!

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