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Array ( [sid] => 46822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inside Of Me [time] => 2004-05-09 18:28:28 [hometext] => what i was going through at one point in my life. [bodytext] => My life used to be so good
and I was always so happy
I had so many great friends
till one day it began and I just wanted it to end
Feeling so alone and no where to go
my heart got filled up with hate
and crying tears of sadness
wanting to get rid of all the madness
I wish I was a little girl again not worrying
about anything just nothing at all
playing on my bed with my toys
holding my little babydoll
Now my life has been broken
and don't know how to get it back together
feeling so hurt and alone
I wonder if im gonna be like this forever
I lost all my friends and no one to tun to
my heart is filled up with pain
feeling so hurt my mind is going insane
So sick of being alone and don't know what to do I wish I could get my life back
So happy and free but right now I have to deal with the pain inside of me
This is my life now my whole world turned misty blue
I just hope one day,one moment
I will make it through
One day i will be happy
one day i will be free
But right now I have to deal with the pain inside of me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 48 [informant] => true_poetry_writer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Inside Of Me

Contributed by true_poetry_writer on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:28:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



My life used to be so good
and I was always so happy
I had so many great friends
till one day it began and I just wanted it to end
Feeling so alone and no where to go
my heart got filled up with hate
and crying tears of sadness
wanting to get rid of all the madness
I wish I was a little girl again not worrying
about anything just nothing at all
playing on my bed with my toys
holding my little babydoll
Now my life has been broken
and don't know how to get it back together
feeling so hurt and alone
I wonder if im gonna be like this forever
I lost all my friends and no one to tun to
my heart is filled up with pain
feeling so hurt my mind is going insane
So sick of being alone and don't know what to do I wish I could get my life back
So happy and free but right now I have to deal with the pain inside of me
This is my life now my whole world turned misty blue
I just hope one day,one moment
I will make it through
One day i will be happy
one day i will be free
But right now I have to deal with the pain inside of me




Copyright © true_poetry_writer ... [ 2004-05-09 18:28:28]
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Re: Inside Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:39:29 PM AEST
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Hoping that moment has passed... I also have learned writing releases some of the pain and life can again become good. June


Re: Inside Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:40:22 PM AEST
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Hey Hunnnie
Honestly i dont know think i have to express or tell you how much I loved this poem when you showed it to me..Thanks for joining I hope you have alot of fun here and makes friends...

xoxo
Care


Re: Inside Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:43:57 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net... I hope you find the peace that of many of us seek... This is a lovely piece of work..
Looking forward to reading more of your work..
Jenni




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