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The crimson flows freely, fulfilling my desire and need

Upon my fingers a drop of your blood drips
And I place the sweet taste of your beauty upon my lips

I need to drink from you, I must feed
As you hurt, as you bleed

I must drag the blade gently across your skin
While I let out everything from within

Carefully, carefully I watch your pretty eyes
Cautiously, cautiously I feed you little white lies

With time the pain will fade, along with the scar
And you will return to me for more, from near or afar

Do not be afraid, I only meant to hurt you a little
(The sadist in me has never felt so beautiful)

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Sadistic Beauty

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:44:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

"Hush now," I whisper, "be silent as I make you bleed"
The crimson flows freely, fulfilling my desire and need

Upon my fingers a drop of your blood drips
And I place the sweet taste of your beauty upon my lips

I need to drink from you, I must feed
As you hurt, as you bleed

I must drag the blade gently across your skin
While I let out everything from within

Carefully, carefully I watch your pretty eyes
Cautiously, cautiously I feed you little white lies

With time the pain will fade, along with the scar
And you will return to me for more, from near or afar

Do not be afraid, I only meant to hurt you a little
(The sadist in me has never felt so beautiful)

Copyright © afraid_of_fear ... [ 2004-05-09 17:44:18]
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Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Diatribe on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:50:38 PM AEST
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great poem... i enjoyed it

Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:52:39 PM AEST
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Beauity at it's sadistic best

Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:02:37 PM AEST
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yeppers charlotte! lol, wonderfully dark creepy poem, vivid like watching a movie, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:37:06 PM AEST
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Awwwww....You see beauty in your blood? I only hope that oneday my friend you see beauty in brilliant rainbows...love.....joy.....and happiness. But until then, your expression comes through loud and clear. This is a dark poem, yet rich in truth!
*I* see beauty in charlotte! Yup! It's there! :-)
Angel always...godspeed my friend...joni

Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:24:31 PM AEST
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ohhh i almost missed this! im glad i came acrossed it.
this was friggin awesome girl. this is one of your best i think. the flow was awesome. so creepy and chilling. wow i just love it. i look forward to more like this. well done!
Becky

Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:27:51 PM AEST
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Ooooh . . . chilling, vivid, and altogether enjoyable :). Nicely done; you have a huge amount of talent. My only gripe is that I wish you'd post more often!

Great job here.

--Nora

Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by bleeding_chains on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:01:22 PM AEST
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this is a great poem, as so are the other poems by you i have read.

Re: Sadistic Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:05:00 AM AEST
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Oh wow charlotte this is amazing. The last line was so powerful, heck, the whole poem is!!!

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