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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Last One Takes The Cake
[time] => 2004-05-09 02:20:32
[hometext] => this has to be the most beautiful poem i have ever written. perfectly bittersweet. feedback appreciated. tell me what ya think, please.
[bodytext] => the wind growls with the compassion of a bear. the thunder rolls in like a train wreck waiting to happen the blade slices over my skin with the precision of a surgeon making the first cut into an expectant mothers' stomach. the first cut is the deepest, but the last one takes the cake. oops, i ran into a vein. the pain tastes bittersweet on a rainy day. the lightening strikes close. how ironic. so does the knife. close to death yet so far from internal happiness. is this really what i want? oh so sweet revenge on those who laughed when i was but a child? then again, who really wants to die? me, i do. the blade sinks in. the last cut is here. and the world falls away as i sink into a infinite sleep. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => SuperAsh16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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