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[aid] => mick
[title] => Don't Leave Me, My Darling
[time] => 2004-05-08 22:11:59
[hometext] => This is about a man who is losing the love of his life- picture yourself in this situation...I did.
[bodytext] => You put your hand on my face I start to cry on you I look into your eyes and see, That you are crying to. Your face is bleeding badly, But you are so beautiful to me Even though your body is broken, Your inner beauty is what I see. I can hear the ambulance coming Help will soon be here, Girl, to ever be away from you, Is worse than my worst fear. The man who hit you steps out of his car He seems to be alright But he's starting to stagger and fall around, It's obvious he's been drinking tonight. We are both crying hard now I just don't know what to say Because I put a ring on your finger, Only just earlier today. Your lips are like the setting sun And your hair is a golden shade Girl, you're everything I've ever called lovely, Your shine will never fade. The rain is starting to fall now Just like the tears from our eyes Please don't leave me, my darling, Please, don't die! I want to live my life with you I want to kiss you everyday I want to live with you in paradise, And raise children along the way. But your heart slows down it's beating, And you cough in a threatening way You are slowly falling away from me, "I love you" is all I can say. You look up into me and whimper "I love you", and you breathe your last I cry all over you now, This life just happens too fast. I will love you forever, my darling. Pete Parke [comments] => 1 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Meat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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