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Array ( [sid] => 4671 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For My Friends : The Rays [time] => 2002-10-06 09:30:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem when I was in 9th grade for my friends...we called each other The Rays because 'Rays' word was formed when we'd join our first initials together..like one was Rehaam, the other Ala'a , two named Yussra..and at the end me Suroor..so I wrote this one for them [bodytext] => A word so special,
A word so true,
A word that's only
between me and you!
A word I always like to say,
even from each other when we are away,
A word to calm
A word to soothe...
A word so special,
My Friends! I Love You!
By Suroor Rizvi (October-1996) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 16 [informant] => PrEtTy-PlEaSe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

For My Friends : The Rays

Contributed by PrEtTy-PlEaSe on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

A word so special,
A word so true,
A word that's only
between me and you!
A word I always like to say,
even from each other when we are away,
A word to calm
A word to soothe...
A word so special,
My Friends! I Love You!
By Suroor Rizvi (October-1996)

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Re: For My Friends : The Rays (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 09:41:01 AM AEST
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I can bet, that if your friends are still around, they would cherish this very much. How much life changes, when we are school to college to jobs, marriage, to kids, and then on and on.......... although I know you most likely haven't gone on thru all of that timeline yet, I beleive your about 20 or 21 or so,but still have wonderful talent. Wait until 20yrs. high school reunion,like I did, and show your works to your friends, then it will really hit home of true friendship. Good write .....
Amber Rose :)

Re: For My Friends : The Rays (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 02:11:51 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. It reminds me of a poem I wrote for my best-friend called "My Angel". I agree with Amber Rose... your friends would cherish this very much if you shared it with them!!! I know I enjoyed it! Great write!
Ginsdance

Re: For My Friends : The Rays (User Rating: 1 )
by PrEtTy-PlEaSe on Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 09:32:23 AM AEST
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Thankyou so much :) I just wanted to say that ..my friends do appreciate this poem a lot because I try to stay in touch with them even now..sometimes through letters..sometimes phones...sometimes email...and sometimes on msn! I just hope I get more friends like them because life sure is running short of such people lately :)

Re: For My Friends : The Rays (User Rating: 1 )
by PrEtTy-PlEaSe on Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 09:34:19 AM AEST
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thankyou so much :) and yeah i have shown it to them ... where can i read yours 'my angel'??

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