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Array ( [sid] => 46663 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Living Inside My Head. [time] => 2004-05-08 13:25:15 [hometext] => What i did to miss,isn't all that bad.she wouldn't let me out the room and had her foot wedged against the door.i was shouting at her to let me out! she started waving some paper round,in front of my face and was saying not to shout at her. [bodytext] => what was i meant to do??? i didn't want to stay in that room anymore. the noise was doing in my head!! she said she won't have me 'asulting' her.
things are happening now... i'm loosing control.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Dark, shadowed walls.
Make the slimed, brickwork of my skull.
Fear floats around.
Ruled by, my dark angel.

My walls are standing still.
They’re the only walls to have not broken.
Rivers of blood flow around.
Carrying death tokens.

Whispers haunt me.
They make me into me.
Some people say I have a big gob.
I’m only trying to chase them away!

I live inside my head!
That’s proberly why I get so mad!
Anything can spark me!
My records turning bad.
And I bet that cow will report me!
Coz I scrunched up the paper,
With her hand.
No one can help me!!
Coz things just come out,
Unplanned…

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Living Inside My Head.

Contributed by deathdrop on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

what was i meant to do??? i didn't want to stay in that room anymore. the noise was doing in my head!! she said she won't have me 'asulting' her.
things are happening now... i'm loosing control.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Dark, shadowed walls.
Make the slimed, brickwork of my skull.
Fear floats around.
Ruled by, my dark angel.

My walls are standing still.
They’re the only walls to have not broken.
Rivers of blood flow around.
Carrying death tokens.

Whispers haunt me.
They make me into me.
Some people say I have a big gob.
I’m only trying to chase them away!

I live inside my head!
That’s proberly why I get so mad!
Anything can spark me!
My records turning bad.
And I bet that cow will report me!
Coz I scrunched up the paper,
With her hand.
No one can help me!!
Coz things just come out,
Unplanned…

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-05-08 13:25:15]
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Re: Living Inside My Head. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:30:30 PM AEST
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You will continue to have problems in life until you learn self control. If you wish a life of turmoil continue on this path. If you choose to have a peaceful calm life you will do some introspection and make some changes. It won't all happen overnight but it can happen if you work on it. Your life outcome is up to you.

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