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Array ( [sid] => 46622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => End [time] => 2004-05-08 05:56:34 [hometext] => i wrote this as it kinda came out of my head so its not great its just how i feel [bodytext] => In this hell
I shouldnt have to hide
Inside of me
How many times ive cried
In my black heart
My loves already died
I cant be helped
Even though ive tried

Here i rest
In this noose ive Tied
Still as death
My last breath sighed
Silent now
No words to be lied
Out of heaven
I know ive been denied
My escape
My suicide
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Suicidal_Muse [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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Contributed by Suicidal_Muse on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 05:56:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



In this hell
I shouldnt have to hide
Inside of me
How many times ive cried
In my black heart
My loves already died
I cant be helped
Even though ive tried

Here i rest
In this noose ive Tied
Still as death
My last breath sighed
Silent now
No words to be lied
Out of heaven
I know ive been denied
My escape
My suicide




Copyright © Suicidal_Muse ... [ 2004-05-08 05:56:34]
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Re: End (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:35:41 AM AEST
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hey, i hope you are ok. if you need to talk to someone... it helps. just hold on. pm me if you wanna talk.

*hugs* phil


Re: End (User Rating: 1 )
by SugimotoYouki on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:28:54 PM AEST
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such beautyfull expressions on such a trist matter... *-*
I'm highly impressed...
also I hope that you'll be allright again...
good luck


Re: End (User Rating: 1 )
by bobbyclay56 on Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 07:16:08 PM AEST
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Felt that way many times loves it.




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