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[aid] => mick
[title] => Is it me??
[time] => 2004-05-07 22:53:02
[hometext] => trust issues... gotta love em...
[bodytext] => My eyes are getting heavy
I'm sinking all so slow
I think I may have lost my mind
but why I do not know
My friends are golden treasures,
but for reason unbeknown
I seem to contradict myself,
and say its all a show
Is it my reality?
Or is it just game?
Is it that my friends are dear to me?
Or do they go and shame my name?
I just keep on asking questions,
Hoping its not true.
The thoughts that go inside my head
are that of my issue
Dont ask me why I'm troubled
I just feel that I am fooled,
but the people that surround me
who claim that I so rule!
I just never feel Im never good enough
and that Im just joke
and the people that are dear to me
can't wait until I choke....
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 166
[topic] => 61
[informant] => JennyFruFru
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 30
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
)
Is it me??
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 10:53:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My eyes are getting heavy
I'm sinking all so slow
I think I may have lost my mind
but why I do not know
My friends are golden treasures,
but for reason unbeknown
I seem to contradict myself,
and say its all a show
Is it my reality?
Or is it just game?
Is it that my friends are dear to me?
Or do they go and shame my name?
I just keep on asking questions,
Hoping its not true.
The thoughts that go inside my head
are that of my issue
Dont ask me why I'm troubled
I just feel that I am fooled,
but the people that surround me
who claim that I so rule!
I just never feel Im never good enough
and that Im just joke
and the people that are dear to me
can't wait until I choke....
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
... [
2004-05-07 22:53:02]
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Re: Is it me??
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:01:04 PM AEST
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MAYBE I SHOULD'VE WROTE THIS ONE B/C IT SOUNDS ALOT LIKE ME! SO I GUESS IT'S SAFE TO SAY I KNOW WHERE YOU'RE COMING FROM!! LIFE CAN SUCK ALOT JENNY,ESPECIALLY SINCE YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO OR WHERE TO GO!!!
IT TAKES GUTS TO WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS FOR EVERYONE ELSE TO READ!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Is it me??
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by JennyFruFru on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:05:18 PM AEST
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Should say...
I just never feel Im good enough
not
I just never feel Im never good enough
Sorry.. :) :) :) |
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Re: Is it me??
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:18:24 PM AEST
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Ah, Sweet Pea, you have to learn to trust yourself, your instincts and your abilities. We all go through this "I doubt myself on everything" bit occasionally but don't let it drag you down. Learn to be strong in your convictions and personal decisions. Think before you act and speak and you will gain more self-control and self-assuredness.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Is it me??
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by Nomdeplume on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:12:38 AM AEST
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The mirror you look thru is your self mirror.
In poetry you are more than good enough.
Impressively so.
Nom de plume |
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Re: Is it me??
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:17:02 AM AEST
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| Each word stung me because I could relate so well to this write. But I think people should believe in themselves and never beat themselves up. |
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Re: Is it me??
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:13:16 AM AEST
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those feelings of insecurity do tend to surface from time to time, i can relate to this, nice one.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Is it me??
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by bernard on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 06:54:16 AM AEST
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Jenny you need a large portion of self confidence tell yourself you are the greatest say it every day before a mirror and before you know it you will be the greatest. Keep smiling.
bernard. |
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Re: Is it me??
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 07:53:25 AM AEST
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It is you, we all question and few often really know.....but this too passes. You are better than you know, best of the best.
Thank you for sharing, lets us look at ourselves. |
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Re: Is it me??
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:44:57 AM AEST
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| we all feel this. do not worry, you are not alone. and it will pass. its not just you. i hope you feel better soon. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Is it me??
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:19:36 PM AEST
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Jenny, that was a mazing
i really enjoying it, really good use of words, i do like such way in writing..
keep writing i'm on my way to see more |
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Re: Is it me??
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by venkat on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 04:12:18 AM AEST
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| feelings well expressed..but try to become a strong spirit..venkat |
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Re: Is it me??
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:13:51 PM AEST
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| Jenny, you have to stop being so hard on yourself my friend. I was and still am in that boat. It feels like noone cares if you're alive or dead. I can totally relate to this write. I hope everything changes and gets better for you. *S* Cynthia |
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