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Array ( [sid] => 46586 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Now it Hurts [time] => 2004-05-07 20:41:47 [hometext] => *This was written after breaking off a long term relationship and when I wrote this, all I was doing was thinking about the break up, and even my thoughts were redundant, so thats why it repeats the words so many times* [bodytext] => I remember the way your arm felt around me
I remember when you'd call
I remember when nothing else mattered at all
I remember those puppy eyes
I remember not hitting on other guys
I remember the nick-names
I remember all the dumb games
I remember all the fun
I remember your friends
I remember being bugged to no end
I remember the trouble
I remember when we were a couple

I noticed when you stopped calling
I noticed when I stoped writing notes
I noticed when things were falling
I noticed I didn't want to catch them
I noticed I just let them drop
I noticed you shrug me off
I noticed I did the same thing a lot
I noticed suddenly I had no time
I noticed when things weren't fine

I wanted to talk
I wanted you there
I wanted you to care
I wanted you to listen
I wanted you to hear
I wanted you to know
That I saw something wrong
I wanted you to know
That the fight with my parents lasted really long

You were low
Instead of a telephone
I read the words on the screen
How I wanted to scream!
That was supposed to be me
who brought it to an end
but I forgot
and you said "I still want you as a friend"

Now it hurts to see your face
Now it hurts to sit by you
Now it hurts to heard your name
Now it hurts to play this game

I'm not mad at you
I'm just really blue
and I don't know what to do [comments] => 4 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 65 [informant] => forgottensorrow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
Now it Hurts

Contributed by forgottensorrow on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:41:47 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



I remember the way your arm felt around me
I remember when you'd call
I remember when nothing else mattered at all
I remember those puppy eyes
I remember not hitting on other guys
I remember the nick-names
I remember all the dumb games
I remember all the fun
I remember your friends
I remember being bugged to no end
I remember the trouble
I remember when we were a couple

I noticed when you stopped calling
I noticed when I stoped writing notes
I noticed when things were falling
I noticed I didn't want to catch them
I noticed I just let them drop
I noticed you shrug me off
I noticed I did the same thing a lot
I noticed suddenly I had no time
I noticed when things weren't fine

I wanted to talk
I wanted you there
I wanted you to care
I wanted you to listen
I wanted you to hear
I wanted you to know
That I saw something wrong
I wanted you to know
That the fight with my parents lasted really long

You were low
Instead of a telephone
I read the words on the screen
How I wanted to scream!
That was supposed to be me
who brought it to an end
but I forgot
and you said "I still want you as a friend"

Now it hurts to see your face
Now it hurts to sit by you
Now it hurts to heard your name
Now it hurts to play this game

I'm not mad at you
I'm just really blue
and I don't know what to do




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Re: Now it Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentPwn on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:49:19 PM AEST
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Yes, so who cares about the repeating words? I think that's the effect.. just emphasizing the way you felt then.


Nice read.


Re: Now it Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:56:22 PM AEST
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I Didn't Mind The Repeating Words For It Only Expressed How You Were Feeling Back Then !!!!!!!!
You Have Expressed Yourself Well Very Sad & Emotional Write !!!!! Written So Well .......Keep Em Coming :-)
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Now it Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:39:08 PM AEST
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It is a very painful thing. Takes lots of adjusting to regain normality to life, but trust me, it does come.

Great write.

The Voice


Re: Now it Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by droughp on Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 03:25:02 PM AEST
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Take out the last paragraph thingy, other than that, Wonderful!




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