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Array ( [sid] => 46566 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drunken Feelings Of Depression [time] => 2004-05-07 18:26:29 [hometext] => second glass of baileys, just kinda let it go out, just emptying things out as i wrote it so i might not make much sense..comments welcomed [bodytext] => im drinkin away my sorrows,
im fed up of feeling this pain,
just want it to go away,
why cant you just be you,
stop hiding behind things,
and just show me you,
i've laid myself on the line,
but your not going to save me,
train nearly upon me,
gonna cut me in half,
im tied but my love,
i can not hide,
im up front and straight forward,
this is me,
i may be to forth right,
but im just me,
the way i express things,
cant i find some way to be,
someway of being me,
being able to cope with these feelings,
and not wanting to get a kniefe,
and end my unfortunate live,
i feel as if i mean nothing to you,
and im just something i wiped off your shoe,
tell me different,
tell me i mean something in this life,
tell me theres something more than this,
i have no great ambitions,
just want a happy life,
but seems i cant even have that,
why should i love you when you make me feel this,
so easily i could loose my temper,
get pi$$ed off and shout at you,
but i know it wont solve anything,
i will not go to that level,
i know better and im fed up with it all,
but i can not just walk away,
this is just the way i am,
i can not just leave things the way they are,
just feelings like one great big open scar,
and these feelings flooding out of me,
so why dont i put this to you,
im not prepared to wait forever,
for you to decide what you want,
make up your mind,
you gonna think with your heart,
or are you gonna think with your head,
one minute you pi$$ed at me,
the next your quite happy to speak to me,
so just stop stinging me along and tell me,
how long i would have to wait,
have i had enough punishment,
dont i deserve some love now,
why dont you just give me a break.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lonely_kakashi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Drunken Feelings Of Depression

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:26:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



im drinkin away my sorrows,
im fed up of feeling this pain,
just want it to go away,
why cant you just be you,
stop hiding behind things,
and just show me you,
i've laid myself on the line,
but your not going to save me,
train nearly upon me,
gonna cut me in half,
im tied but my love,
i can not hide,
im up front and straight forward,
this is me,
i may be to forth right,
but im just me,
the way i express things,
cant i find some way to be,
someway of being me,
being able to cope with these feelings,
and not wanting to get a kniefe,
and end my unfortunate live,
i feel as if i mean nothing to you,
and im just something i wiped off your shoe,
tell me different,
tell me i mean something in this life,
tell me theres something more than this,
i have no great ambitions,
just want a happy life,
but seems i cant even have that,
why should i love you when you make me feel this,
so easily i could loose my temper,
get pi$$ed off and shout at you,
but i know it wont solve anything,
i will not go to that level,
i know better and im fed up with it all,
but i can not just walk away,
this is just the way i am,
i can not just leave things the way they are,
just feelings like one great big open scar,
and these feelings flooding out of me,
so why dont i put this to you,
im not prepared to wait forever,
for you to decide what you want,
make up your mind,
you gonna think with your heart,
or are you gonna think with your head,
one minute you pi$$ed at me,
the next your quite happy to speak to me,
so just stop stinging me along and tell me,
how long i would have to wait,
have i had enough punishment,
dont i deserve some love now,
why dont you just give me a break.




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Re: Drunken Feelings Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentPwn on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:55:31 PM AEST
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"and not wanting to get a knife, and end my unfortunate life." That was a good line right there. =] I like; I like a lot.


Re: Drunken Feelings Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:47:12 AM AEST
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I dont know what i want. you also know getting drunk definitely wont make me want you no matter if you pour out ur feelings, think about what i mean. i guess u took matt's advice and that was almost your ultimatum. well my answer is i really dont know. as u witnessed from my behaviour last night i am not me right now, im rather messed up and un sure whether im coming or going. i am sorry and always will be. Es tut mir leid. see i'll even say sorry in a different language. just to get across the point i am truly sorry.

Genna




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