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Array ( [sid] => 46561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => :oS I'm Worried So: [time] => 2004-05-07 17:23:50 [hometext] => I'm worried about my husband. [bodytext] => I'm worried about you,
you went to the hospital
to see why the
left side of your face
feels numb.

We both figured
you might have
suffered a stroke in your sleep.

I'm worried that you won't
be able to see the
kids grow up.

They love you
with all their
heart and soul.

I'm worried about
what the kids are going to think
if....
we tell them.

You're too young
to go through this.

I'm worried you won't
be here for us,
what am I supposed to do?

I am falling
apart inside.

I just don't know what to do....
I'm worried.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
May.7/2004
[comments] => 10 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Cynthia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
:oS I'm Worried So:

Contributed by Cynthia on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I'm worried about you,
you went to the hospital
to see why the
left side of your face
feels numb.

We both figured
you might have
suffered a stroke in your sleep.

I'm worried that you won't
be able to see the
kids grow up.

They love you
with all their
heart and soul.

I'm worried about
what the kids are going to think
if....
we tell them.

You're too young
to go through this.

I'm worried you won't
be here for us,
what am I supposed to do?

I am falling
apart inside.

I just don't know what to do....
I'm worried.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
May.7/2004




Copyright © Cynthia ... [ 2004-05-07 17:23:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:59:07 PM AEST
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Cynthia, honey I am so sorry this is happening. Please keep us informed as to his condition and what they say.

Love,
Rita


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:06:20 PM AEST
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GOD BLEES HIM & YOU & YOUR KIDS! IT IS SO SAD TO THINK OF SUCH A THING AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE!! WITH YOUR GREAT LOVE & THE KIDS TOO,I'M SURE YOU'LL BE ABLE TO PULL THROUGH THIS!!! SWEET
POEM CYNTHIA,ALL MY PRAYERS GO OUT TO YOU & YOUR FAMILY,GOD BLESS YOU ALL!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:10:00 PM AEST
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Oh dear, I'm so very sorry to hear this news!
But please Cynthia promise yourself this!
There are two days in everyone's life that will simply kill them and fill them with strife.
One is yesterday......and the other is tomorrow. Train you mind to think of just today, 'cause in just one day......there are enough anxietites for that day....and if you bring the other two in with then,,,,,,you're going to be in a big stew.
Think positive thoughts Cynthia....and pray alot,...those two things have kept me going all these many years,
Please know I'm always here for you
love
consue


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:24:46 AM AEST
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Oh Hun this is so sad....... I know its a worry but dont borrow trouble bt worry though its hard I know.
A stroke is a scary thing but there are many other things that can cause this sort of thing, something as simple as a pinched nerve...... Keep me informed on how things are going ok? Ill say a prayer for you ( I dont do alot of praying mind you) but I will........
Michelle


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 07:50:33 PM AEST
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Big {{{{{{{{{{{ Hug }}}}}}}}}}}} Sis This Is So Sad I Hope He's Ok !!!!!!
Oh Lord What Cold Chills Ran Over Me When I Read This !!!!!!!
I'll Pray For You And Him Girl Friend !!!!!!!!!!! Love Ya Sis And Hope Everything Is Ok With Your Hubby !!!!!!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
******************************


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:31:33 AM AEST
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I'm so soryy to hear about your husband and you'll are in my prayers.
We serve an awesome god.
Thank u so much for your thoughts-n-prayers about my grandson.
god bless u-n-yours.
luv, huggs, prayers, faith, hope, peace,
emy
by the way very good writing even tho sad.


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 04:45:42 PM AEST
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stay strong my friend.
Arden


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 08:53:21 PM AEST
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wow, this one brought tears to my eyes. You've captured the feelings better than anyone else ever could.


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:06:35 AM AEST
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Oh..dear friend..this is very shocking and sad..I will pray for his good health..
Om Namah Sivaaya...venkat


Re: :oS I'm Worried So: (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:08:44 PM AEST
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oh, wow . . . this is a little belated, but I certainly hope he's alright now. Best wishes to him, you, and your family, and my compliments on an emotional, powerful poem :).

--Nora




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