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Array ( [sid] => 46546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Judgement Day [time] => 2004-05-07 15:22:06 [hometext] => It's a poem, about lies and deciet and cool stuff like that [bodytext] => I looked upon your eyes with hope
And foolishly I dared to dream
Although your face is still the same
Behind your eyes lie silent screams

I dared to love you, how I fell!
Crushed and bleeding, broken wings
And in your arms I found my home
You offered more than any king

Life was never smooth for me
I wisely didn't think to ask
But when I looked upon your eyes
I knew you saw behind the mask

Last night I opened up my soul
Your guard slipped and I saw what's real
You never loved, but led me on
You lived behind a mask, like me

Hide your heart and so kill mine!
Burn our bridge and wish me dead
A flash of truth behind your eyes
That timeless night you shared my bed.

Alas, your footsteps fade away
I know I'll never hear again
Tears scorch my cheeks and I realize
I’m ending with nothing…just as I began. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Cora-Windover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Judgement Day

Contributed by Cora-Windover on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:22:06 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I looked upon your eyes with hope
And foolishly I dared to dream
Although your face is still the same
Behind your eyes lie silent screams

I dared to love you, how I fell!
Crushed and bleeding, broken wings
And in your arms I found my home
You offered more than any king

Life was never smooth for me
I wisely didn't think to ask
But when I looked upon your eyes
I knew you saw behind the mask

Last night I opened up my soul
Your guard slipped and I saw what's real
You never loved, but led me on
You lived behind a mask, like me

Hide your heart and so kill mine!
Burn our bridge and wish me dead
A flash of truth behind your eyes
That timeless night you shared my bed.

Alas, your footsteps fade away
I know I'll never hear again
Tears scorch my cheeks and I realize
I’m ending with nothing…just as I began.

Copyright © Cora-Windover ... [ 2004-05-07 15:22:06]
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Re: Judgement Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:25:50 PM AEST
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This was incredible.
I think this is one of my tops for the day.
Perfectly written.
Just amazing work.

Re: Judgement Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:36:29 PM AEST
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Thats so deep, I loved it. I dont know what else to say, im taken away.

Re: Judgement Day (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 04:16:55 PM AEST
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words fail to describe my feelings for the sad portrayed. excellent write.
thanks for sharing

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