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Array ( [sid] => 46423 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood turns Black [time] => 2004-05-06 15:43:36 [hometext] => This is from my little red book. (kinda like a diary but more'graphic') [bodytext] => Rembering this, Rembering that
A small wounded animal
Caught in a trap
Suddenly turned cannibal
Devour his own the survive

It doesnt matter how hard it tries
To hide all the feelings
To tell all the lies
It will destroy all beings
Unwitting deception is always sublime

Watch it wither and bleed on the floor
Its last dying breaths
A mind ***** just like bfore
This isn't a test
Self-inflicted pain to trap the weak
In this vortex of evil
His flavour of the week

***

No matter what everyone's gonna pay
I'll kill them
Just like in my dreams yesterday
Is this a deception?
Is it a lie?
Is he not serious?
Seeking attention?

NO [comments] => 4 [counter] => 546 [topic] => 59 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Blood turns Black

Contributed by alecfernadez on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:43:36 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Rembering this, Rembering that
A small wounded animal
Caught in a trap
Suddenly turned cannibal
Devour his own the survive

It doesnt matter how hard it tries
To hide all the feelings
To tell all the lies
It will destroy all beings
Unwitting deception is always sublime

Watch it wither and bleed on the floor
Its last dying breaths
A mind ***** just like bfore
This isn't a test
Self-inflicted pain to trap the weak
In this vortex of evil
His flavour of the week

***

No matter what everyone's gonna pay
I'll kill them
Just like in my dreams yesterday
Is this a deception?
Is it a lie?
Is he not serious?
Seeking attention?

NO

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-05-06 15:43:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Blood turns Black (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:54:46 PM AEST
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whoa, powerful.
another awesome write.
i really liked this one.
well done keep it up.
Arden

Re: Blood turns Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:18:42 PM AEST
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WHOA!!!!!!! Alec, this was very dark and disturbing. Excellent job. Keep up the good work. *S* Cynthia

Re: Blood turns Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:21:03 PM AEST
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dark and melodic, heavy if anything... glad you stick it in the RED book, oi. good stuff! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Blood turns Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Luka on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:17:39 PM AEST
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if this is the type of poetry you post in your little red book, then through that damn thing away, this poem was garbage, everyone writes a bad poem once in a while

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