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Something infected them, it was so sublime,
It injected them into a world filled with love,
Where they flew in the sky so far above

If life was so simple, then love was so hard,
Simple enough, 'I love you' engraved in a card,
But eventually things had to fall apart,
If life can die, then two lovers could part

But even with misfortune, love and hate,
They could not leave, and they could not wait,
In a world always slowly rotating,
And people even faster; always hating

It was decided that if they couldnt have each other
Then no other person in the world could,
So they clasped a knife in each of their hands,
And as the sun collapsed below the land,
They embraced, and gave themseleves to ashes [comments] => 3 [counter] => 460 [topic] => 22 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Tragic Ending

Contributed by alecfernadez on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:20:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When Andrew and Helen met for the first time,
Something infected them, it was so sublime,
It injected them into a world filled with love,
Where they flew in the sky so far above

If life was so simple, then love was so hard,
Simple enough, 'I love you' engraved in a card,
But eventually things had to fall apart,
If life can die, then two lovers could part

But even with misfortune, love and hate,
They could not leave, and they could not wait,
In a world always slowly rotating,
And people even faster; always hating

It was decided that if they couldnt have each other
Then no other person in the world could,
So they clasped a knife in each of their hands,
And as the sun collapsed below the land,
They embraced, and gave themseleves to ashes

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-05-06 11:20:03]
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Re: Tragic Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:34:27 AM AEST
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wow. simply beautiful but tragic. it is so true in the world of love that sometimes we feel that if we can not have love, than no other can either. beautiful write.

Re: Tragic Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:51:12 PM AEST
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the romantic period is over, yet the style flourishes evermore. do i like this? oh yes, but the cynicism eats me away for some reason. egh, don't mind me - good write. ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Tragic Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:49:37 PM AEST
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It happens... beautiful..

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