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Buried long before its prime.
Silenced from the beginning.
Each apart, no one winning.
Leaving one feeling hollow,
So unpredictable, unable to follow.
Dreams that were meant to be,
What could have been,
Between you and me.
Love, no one won,
Yet we were given the gift,
Of three precious sons.
Being together, yet all alone.
Protection from a heart of stone.
Unshed tears locked away,
In search of healing, but not today.
Distant love, did not have to win.
As it buried our future,
Heavy sigh...
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Distant Love

Contributed by HOPE4ME2 on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:46:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Love unreachable, trapped in time.
Buried long before its prime.
Silenced from the beginning.
Each apart, no one winning.
Leaving one feeling hollow,
So unpredictable, unable to follow.
Dreams that were meant to be,
What could have been,
Between you and me.
Love, no one won,
Yet we were given the gift,
Of three precious sons.
Being together, yet all alone.
Protection from a heart of stone.
Unshed tears locked away,
In search of healing, but not today.
Distant love, did not have to win.
As it buried our future,
Heavy sigh...
Oh, what could have been.

Copyright © HOPE4ME2 ... [ 2004-05-05 18:46:02]
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Re: Distant Love (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:37:40 PM AEST
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oh it always hurts to think of what could've been
great poem

Re: Distant Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Diatribe on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:42:34 PM AEST
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good write! love at distance sucks... and thinking about what could have been sucks even more... it's like beating yourself up... it's often a good idea not to dwell on the past, but who am I to say? I do it all the time... nice poem

Re: Distant Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:26:17 PM AEST
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Good poem, I'm gonna start looking for your poetry more often.

Re: Distant Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:39:16 PM AEST
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nice writing style. the what if questions are the worst questions the mind can conceive.

Re: Distant Love (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:46:39 PM AEST
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NICE POEM,SAD SUBJECT! HIS LOSS ALTHOUGH YOU HAVE NOTHING TO GAIN!!
SOUNDS LIKE YOU'VE GOT A PRETTY GOOD HEART!!! LOVE SHOULDN'T BE TOO FAR AWAY FOR YA!!!!
DAN!!!!!

Re: Distant Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 06:47:02 AM AEST
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This one has some really good lines! Some of the best poems are the ones written after a heartbreak, and your poem is awesome. I guess the breaking of the heart consumes the whole body, and all that is in you mourns its loss. Then your whole being weeps, and all the words you write come from your deepest heart, where the most beautiful words can be found.
Well that was a bit long, I'll stop now.
Take care, love again.
David

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