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yesterday's fight with him,

I can only imagine what others might say about the bruises,

I lay on my floor,

A broken me,

The one that can not fight anymore,

Battered and bruised,

Almost dieing,

Not feeling,

I wish to not feel,

Is my wish comming true?

No it's is not i can still feel the him hit me,

I look in the mirror,

And say " it's just another day",

As i look at a picture of before to my self in the mirror,

I wonder,

Where is the care free, pretty, sophistacated, strong me?,

Who is this help less weak, tired woman?,

Just me,

The one who forgot my self for him,

I forgot to be my self.

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Who are you in the mirror?

Contributed by blossomingcherry5353 on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:45:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As I put on my make up to hide the scars of
yesterday's fight with him,

I can only imagine what others might say about the bruises,

I lay on my floor,

A broken me,

The one that can not fight anymore,

Battered and bruised,

Almost dieing,

Not feeling,

I wish to not feel,

Is my wish comming true?

No it's is not i can still feel the him hit me,

I look in the mirror,

And say " it's just another day",

As i look at a picture of before to my self in the mirror,

I wonder,

Where is the care free, pretty, sophistacated, strong me?,

Who is this help less weak, tired woman?,

Just me,

The one who forgot my self for him,

I forgot to be my self.

Copyright © blossomingcherry5353 ... [ 2004-05-05 18:45:36]
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Re: Who are you in the mirror? (User Rating: 1 )
by Diatribe on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:45:00 PM AEST
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never forget yourself for the sake of someone else... sounds like a bad relationship... one you need to turn away from... good luck

Re: Who are you in the mirror? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:28:17 PM AEST
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Very powerful indeed....then again, life can be at times.

BLessings
HOPE4ME2

Re: Who are you in the mirror? (User Rating: 1 )
by BrghtNSnshny on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:30:28 PM AEST
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that happens in too many relationships, that is so sad no one should sacrafice themselves for another

Re: Who are you in the mirror? (User Rating: 1 )
by alwys2nv on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:41:16 AM AEST
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never give your self up for some one else always stay true to your self...
never lose hope cause when you do ....your already dead.. believe me i been there to many times

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