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Amazing
Contributed by
RedRose
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:24:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Amazing
Amazing how little one notices
Living in a smoked filled world
Amazing what happens
when no one is looking
It’s got to be okay on the other side
For from where you are
the world is burning down
Care to have a cocktail,
while I sniff a little cocaine
Care to dance with me,
while I rape you on the floor
Care to hold my hand
while I kill the little fag
Care to disagree with me
While I’ve got the my knife at your throat
For, from where you are
the world is looking dark
Amazing where people go
when running for your life
Amazing who you can know
when living in the pits
Everyday you tell yourself
It’s got to be better
on the other side
For, from where you are
the world is going to hell
Care to join me
while I have a little heroin
Care to walk with me
while I kill yourself being
Care to sing with me
while I kill the Nazi pigs
Care to ask me why
when my arms around your neck
For, from where you are
the world is nothing but death
Amazing how the world looks
when you have to hide day by day
Amazing what happens
when you just can’t hide anymore
Amazing where you will look
when searching for your soul
Amazing who you will *****
when crawling on the floor
And…
Everyday you keep
telling yourself
It has to be better,
just has to be better
On the other side
Red
Rose
Copyright ©
RedRose
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2004-05-05 17:24:40]
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Re: Amazing
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:02:48 PM AEST
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| Very well done! Excellently done! |
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Re: Amazing
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by hotrod55 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 10:17:36 PM AEST
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Holy Monkeys;
I really love your poems.
~~HotRod55~~ |
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Re: Amazing
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:37:05 PM AEST
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| good read... |
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