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Array ( [sid] => 46245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Carnival Of Doom [time] => 2004-05-05 00:15:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There are times
that
I am feeling so strong
then there are times
that
everything is wrong.
Life is like a carnival
the carousel
of emotions ebb and flow
forever changing,
just can't seem to decide
where I belong.
Roller coaster of inner visions
rock and roll
vibrate and shake
as I go deep
inside
into the tunnel of love
as I race to the fate
that is all mine,
carnival
is thrilling me
is spinning me
to emotional levels
I’ve never known,
round and round
up and down I ride
as I try to find where I belong.

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Carnival Of Doom

Contributed by secretwind on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 12:15:08 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

There are times
that
I am feeling so strong
then there are times
that
everything is wrong.
Life is like a carnival
the carousel
of emotions ebb and flow
forever changing,
just can't seem to decide
where I belong.
Roller coaster of inner visions
rock and roll
vibrate and shake
as I go deep
inside
into the tunnel of love
as I race to the fate
that is all mine,
carnival
is thrilling me
is spinning me
to emotional levels
I’ve never known,
round and round
up and down I ride
as I try to find where I belong.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-05-05 00:15:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Carnival Of Doom (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:14:21 AM AEST
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Hey now,
this one is very deep.
At times it gets like this, especially as much as you've been thru, like the loose of your close friend from cancer.
Luv the way u draw this picture.
You'll get thru, as I have confidence in u.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy
great write even tho at times we're sad.

Re: Carnival Of Doom (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:25:56 AM AEST
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yes,
very well written.
Your ability to shape the rollercoaster
ride of emotions with words is really amazing

Re: Carnival Of Doom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:54:53 AM AEST
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I actually thought this was a song lyric halfway down, but it changed my mind at the end. Nice title - made me click on.
I like the way you use analogy for the emotions. Very vibrant.
Good work.

Re: Carnival Of Doom (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 08:31:08 AM AEST
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I liked this. Although, the word "doom" in the title is sort of misleading. I wonder why it was on the "Least read poems" list?

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