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Kill Them All
Contributed by
IamChrisHuff
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:19:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Be not afraid, my friends!
Your day of salvation arrives!
Your enemies are defeated
You must now lay down your lives!
Be not cowardly, my friends!
You ride your noble steeds!
Today you cut down enemies,
The fight, the war, you lead!
Take not a heart of mercy
When you ride against your foes!
Always be alert and ready,
Always on your toes!
They cannot ride against you, friends,
The force of death will fall!
Now take your anger, soldiers,
And go, and kill them all!
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IamChrisHuff
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2004-05-04 19:19:48]
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Re: Kill Them All
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:25:36 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write!
The last two lines, Now take your anger, soilders,
and go kill them all.
brings the reality of a soilder on the battle field.
It's a great write as it shows the agonies of war.
Very creative work of art.
luv, huggs, hope, peace,
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Re: Kill Them All
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by tHE_pERFECT_wORLD on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:34:35 PM AEST
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I like.
Its one of those things alot of people refuse to see in war because of its "good inntentions", and like I've always said, "Fight war, not wars."
Anyways, good write, and even though it's already been said, the last two lines very powerful and brilliant, look forward to reading moe of your stuff.
This has been a note from tHRE_pERFECT_wORLD
:*:Radicalism~
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Re: Kill Them All
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by Randibee85 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:19:21 PM AEST
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GOD THAT IS AWESOME!
For some morbid reason I smiled... But, it was just that f***ing good! |
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