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Just tear us apart
When I start to get closer
To your heart?

It seems that the nearer
To you that I get
The more that life
Wants me to forget

It's as if we
Weren't meant to be
My heart will now cry
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Eternity's Tears

Contributed by wachumiri on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:05:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why does life
Just tear us apart
When I start to get closer
To your heart?

It seems that the nearer
To you that I get
The more that life
Wants me to forget

It's as if we
Weren't meant to be
My heart will now cry
For eternity

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-05-04 19:05:48]
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Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:29:37 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing!
I certainly know the feeling..
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by lexxie on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:32:11 AM AEST
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i know what your feeling or where feeling i went threw the same thing i just hope your doing better and that was an awsome wright keep wrighting

~!~*!~*!~*lexxie~!*~!*~*!~*

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:06:28 AM AEST
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well im glad you are happy now and found a new love........ :) :) :) nice display of emotion so so sad

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:01:30 PM AEST
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short but very very sad.. :(
written so well.
wonderfully done.
Arden

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:08:56 PM AEST
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I pray with you that this poem is not so... God bless you my brother, I love you in the Lord.
Em

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:28:24 PM AEST
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Very feeling, cousin. It's about me, right?
(ha ha)
Keep strong. Remember, even when it doesn't feel like it, the Universe is conspiring in your favor. There's a reason. Mayhap you need to gain something through suffering (the usual channel to wisdom, I've learned). Remember, your path is your own, made upon God's inspiration, and nothing can pull you off of it if you don't let it.
Andrew

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:00:35 PM AEST
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No you are not losing your mind, you reflect in your poem the world's sorrow well. I am very impressed with your empathy.

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:35:23 PM AEST
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Andrew's right (as usual... and as much as I hate to admit it). Seriously though, he is. It's all in God's plan. As I often say, "The only one that needs to understand what's going on with anything is Him"

Heartwrenching poem though. Another one I like.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:29:56 PM AEST
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awww sad... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Eternity's Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:31:57 PM AEST
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This is so sad, and I can see my own past in it. It seems that we lose our minds when we lose our hearts. Nothing ever makes sense again. You put the feelings into words well.

Ann

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