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Array ( [sid] => 46177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Pretty Place has Been Found [time] => 2004-05-04 16:24:18 [hometext] => ok this is a up peom:| [bodytext] => Sitting here
as a normal person

The thing unknown to
everybody
including friends and family
is my love

My love for
the markers
the coke
the ice
the heroine
ect

All anger gets out
of my by makin me
high

The floor moving
underneith my feet
the blurring colors and swirls
surrounding me

Everythings so
peaceful
this is my paradise
that I cant and will never
excape
even though
I tryed

Everythings so pretty but I want
and I need to get away from it
This is the pretty place Im going to
where the flowers grow
I will be back
in an hour or so

I NEED OUT!!!
These blood shot eyes have seen
enough
and this swolen nose has snorted
enough! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 66 [informant] => jamsters [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

The Pretty Place has Been Found

Contributed by jamsters on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:24:18 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Sitting here
as a normal person

The thing unknown to
everybody
including friends and family
is my love

My love for
the markers
the coke
the ice
the heroine
ect

All anger gets out
of my by makin me
high

The floor moving
underneith my feet
the blurring colors and swirls
surrounding me

Everythings so
peaceful
this is my paradise
that I cant and will never
excape
even though
I tryed

Everythings so pretty but I want
and I need to get away from it
This is the pretty place Im going to
where the flowers grow
I will be back
in an hour or so

I NEED OUT!!!
These blood shot eyes have seen
enough
and this swolen nose has snorted
enough!

Copyright © jamsters ... [ 2004-05-04 16:24:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Pretty Place has Been Found (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:52:16 PM AEST
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very interesting and honest write

Re: The Pretty Place has Been Found (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:11:55 PM AEST
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man, so much i would say on this, but all i can say is that this is creative and good writing... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: The Pretty Place has Been Found (User Rating: 1 )
by monkey on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:24:22 PM AEST
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Please tell me the part about the ice, heroine, and coke are exaggerations too. Believe it or not...as perfect as my life may seem...its not. Sometimes I feel like running away, or commiting suicide (althought I never would because id miss you guys too much!!) Sometimes I just want to lock myself in my closet, cry, and hide from the world for days. Other days, I feel like I could kick anybodys @$$... You know what I mean... lol! Anyways, i'll ttyl luv ya 4eva ~ Monkey

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