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love, must be a lie
Contributed by
MikeTheFreak
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:18:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love must be a lie
One that deceives me
One i want to beleive
One that made me be
Love may be real
For ive felt once but breifly
I poured my heat into it
Gave it all i had
Love may be a weapon
For it hurts more than fists
For it hurts more than steel
For it plagues my heart eternally
But love must be a lie
No matter how much i gave i did not receive
The love i receive i will not accept
Therefore love must be a lie
To me
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MikeTheFreak
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2004-05-04 16:18:40]
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Re: love, must be a lie
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:55:38 PM AEST
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| so sad but so well written. i hope your pain will heal soon and that you'll learn to trust in love again and see how true and beautiful it can be. |
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Re: love, must be a lie
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:09:55 PM AEST
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patience is a virtue, i think one time later on you'll realize otherwise about love... but good write. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: love, must be a lie
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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| Love isn't a lie, but when you lose it, it does hurt. I behaved badly, and lost it through my own fault...I'd do anything to get it back but I can't un-do the past...I blame him,,,but it was me. Well, it always takes two I guess...loved your poem, don't give up on love. I've given up on life... |
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Re: love, must be a lie
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by Juliet on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:59:18 PM AEST
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| Aww, how sad. I feel that way sometimes. |
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